|Reviews for Follow Me Revised|
| luv2read134 3/31/09 . chapter 1
aw! its fics like these that make me feel bad for jake...
please check out my entry to this contest!
| Claire Bloom 3/23/09 . chapter 1
You just love to hate Jacob in so many ways, but in this, even though he is still being his usual obnoxious self, you actually hate to love him.. He is sweet and can't help but get to you. Lucky Bella, having two guys pledge to do anything for you.
Great Job :o)
| dreaming in black and white 3/4/09 . chapter 1
Awe...*sniffles for Jake* I really liked this - particularly the idea of them chasing after each other, and Jake's thoughts on that. And the last line - loved that too! Great job, and good luck with the contest! x :)