LOLS

put their pasts behind them

[past, unless you’re handling different universes in which case I think your setup isn’t clear and conclusive]

(Um…in case you didn't know, that's a theme park.)

[Don’t put Author’s Notes within the chapter. If you’re writing properly, information should come to the audience through the narrative, not as “oops, I forgot to tell you this vital information”]

Ryoga with horseshoe eyes

[Makes no sense]

the cart thingy slowly climbed up the track/hill/thing

[Can I just call this a travesty against good grammar and narrative?]

and fun stuff like that.

[In the Ranmaverse, that could include copious amounts of pain]

commenced their fighting.

[“their” is unnecessary]

they just clung to the wall.

[There’s no holding the wall, “centripetal force” is really momentum pushing them in an outward direction and the walls arrest continued movement, giving the impression of an outward gravitational force]

as if they were a door or something like that

[Or something. Your narrative definitely isn’t strong enough for anything strong]

WOW! THE LOGIC!)

[This story has none. Nor, apparently, does it have a proofreader, or any sense of contiguous thought]

Haha, very nice...hysterical. xD

ya know what...

that's so funny that i wish it actually WOULD happen in the show... even though it can't.

arigatou...

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Pretty confusing at the end when they try to switch each other back, but that may just be my illiterate-ness kicking in! _

I especially liked the part where they killed Ronald McDonald, and what would Genma be like as a monster? And Pantyhose Taro as a... panda?

Strange, STRANGE images there. _

Kayo "Kitty" Usami: *tries to say something but can't because she's laughing too hard*Cycabell: In other words, she loves Confused: AND SO DO WE!Cycabell: RC, are you using HTML again?RC: Heh heh...*slinks away*

Funny! Very funny! I love your Ranma fics!

TOO SILLY!

About time somebody took care of Ronald McDonald! I would have loved it if Ryoga had been able to change Ranma into a cat in time! I could just imagine him going into the neko-ken and staying that way! The ending is hilarious, with the typical, "here we go again," scene. Also loved the car sequences.

clap-clap-clap! that was awsome!

And funny too!

It was kinda OOC too! (AN ILLUSION, 2 FISH OR 2 FACES)

This me laugh so hard! For one chapter this is one of your best stories, you shouild consider making a sequal...

Wai! I love it! Poor little Mousse. Shampoo is so mean to him. I think that Ranma sould have steyed the duck, Ryoga needs to stey Pi-chan, Shampoo makes a good cat and Mousse would be funny as a girl! ) Nice story!

almost as good as your inu-yasha stories. the ending leaves an opening for a sequel, but judging by the date, there won't be one. too bad.

I couldn't stop laughing... It was great! I liked the fact that none of them were OOC! I also like the ending... leaves room for a sequal!-

! That was so funny! This is soooooo going on my favorites. I loved the Genma Pantyhose Taro thing. I think I might just read this again...every hour...