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Reviews for: The Danger and the Power
yongwonhi
2009-03-08 . chapter 1
Very beautifully written. I always hoped that out of all the girls, at least Ann would be successful in the 'love' department. You truly did her character justice and I love the relationship you created between Ann and Pippa. Never got to really see that develop in the story so it was interesting. Great job :)
othalwaysandforever23
2009-03-04 . chapter 1
Okay, so, I hope a lot more people review this, because it was totally awesome!
Normally, I don't really like Ann, but I think that you write her perspective beautifully.
You wrote her very realistically, with the insecurities and such.
I'm glad that she got her nice "Perils of Ann" ending with Charlie like she always wanted. I also like that the ending was happy, but slightly tinged with sadness because of the mention of Gemma, Fee, etc. and how they would do anything to get their loves back.
Charlie/Ann was so implied in the books. It just works.
Great writing!
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