 othalwaysandforever23 2009-03-04 . chapter 1Okay, so, I hope a lot more people review this, because it was totally awesome!
Normally, I don't really like Ann, but I think that you write her perspective beautifully.
You wrote her very realistically, with the insecurities and such.
I'm glad that she got her nice "Perils of Ann" ending with Charlie like she always wanted. I also like that the ending was happy, but slightly tinged with sadness because of the mention of Gemma, Fee, etc. and how they would do anything to get their loves back.
Charlie/Ann was so implied in the books. It just works.
Great writing! |