|Reviews for Time, Fate, and Love|
| KrisTWIN 7/13/12 . chapter 8
So I finally got around to reading this chapter! Great job :) I'm not sure all those tests are necessary for a UTI diagnosis though... one of my friends had one and she said the hospital just made her pee in a cup. But then again, what do I know? Anyway, I loved this part:
"Of course it does. Do you find me simply irresistible or don't you?"
Mark smiled. "Of course I do. I just have other things that need to get done before the wedding, that I don't have time to lavish you all day."
I leaned over and kissed him on the cheek. "I love you," I said.
| KrisTWIN 7/9/11 . chapter 8
I am glad to hear that Natalie is okay... when she woke up in pain I was afraid something awful was going to happen to her!
I wonder how long Ryan and Justine can keep this little secret relationship of yours a secret... I can't imagine it will be long before someone sees them together and begins speculating and then before you know it the entire town is questioning whether they're back together or not. That would be an interesting plot twist actually! If the entire town found out about the "forbidden" couple, before Justine's mother did, well let's just talk about DRAMA! (maybe you can work it in for me, you're #1 reviewer?)
Love this story! Keep up the good work :D
| KrisTWIN 6/12/11 . chapter 7
I am sooo excited that Ryan and Justine are officially back together! It's too bad that Justine's mom still can't get over the high school drama... hopefully it won't interfere with her and Ryan's relationship this time around! I think it's funny how Ryan just rolled over under the covers and Justine's mom ignored the fact that there was a guy in her bed, haha! I also can't wait to find out what happens next with Natalie!
Keep up the good work :D
| KrisTWIN 12/30/10 . chapter 6
First, I just wanted to thank you for recognizing me at the beginning of your chapter, it makes me feel like you truly appreciate these reviews that I work so hard on!
Now, onto the feedback:
"The center diamond sat in the middle of two smaller cut diamond" the second "diamond" needs to be plural!
I loved how you did this "previously in..." because it allowed us to hear more of the previous chapter than the last couple lines... although it took me a minute to realize what you were doing. I was confused at first because I didn't realize the lines didn't all flow together nicely...
I hope the arsonist and Brian's murderer are brought to Justice, maybe Ryan and Justine will work together (lawyer and court reporter) to figure out who the culprit is!
It was cute how Ryan was so in-tune with Justine the whole night. My only problem with the restaurant scene is that they barely get there and start conversation before they leave again,and I know you were probably anxious to get Justine home, but if you get a chance, try expanding that section a little bit...
Finally, are they really going to hook up with her parents down the hall? I mean they are old enough, but maybe one of them will come to their senses and realize that it's a bad idea (maybe Ryan even, since that goes against all stereotypes- and I love breaking stereotypes!)
Good luck! Keep up the awesome writing, and I can't wait until you update again!
| KrisTWIN 7/15/10 . chapter 1
Sorry, I forgot to mention that I absolutely LOVE the "Previously in Time, Fate, and Love" section... it really helped me get back into the story, and it reminded me of TV shows that show you what happened on last weeks episode! If you can, keep doing it!
| To Anon 7/15/10 . chapter 1
If you want to know why this is in the Shakespeare section, maybe you should read the first one, since this story is the SEQUEL. She based the first story off of Romeo and Juliet, and did a damn fine job if I do say so myself!
Keep it up 2ofSix, you're awesome!
| KrisTWIN 7/15/10 . chapter 5
SQUEEEEEEE! Yes, that was my pathetic attempt at trying to enunciate a squeal.
Update this story ASAP, I want to find out what happens, your other (fantastic) stories can wait!
| KrisTWIN 8/31/09 . chapter 4
(I didn't feel like signing in...)
Ugh! I didn't want to stop reading, I was hoping you had miraculously uploaded chapter 5 too... Unfortunately that little wish of mine did not actually happen, so now I'm required to wait until you update again (so update SOON!)
I have no idea what the guys are going to do, I'm hoping they are going to persuade Justine to follow her heart, and she will stop denying that she still does love Ryan! I really hope they get back together!
Also, how are Natalie's wedding plans coming along? We haven't heard from that happy couple in a while :)
| KrisTWIN 7/29/09 . chapter 3
Great chapter, although I was a little disappointed that Ryan wasn't in this one... Hopefully he will show up in the next chapter, and more flirting will occur!
| KrisTWIN 7/7/09 . chapter 2
OMG! This was so cute! I love how they are flirting with each other, and they both want to get back together with each other! I know Justine keeps saying "Ryan, we can't do this. I don't love you anymore. blah, blah, blah..." but you can totally tell that she is just saying that! I hope they get back together! And I'm so excited that Natalie and Mark are getting married! Update soon! I love this story :)
| living in dreamland 7/7/09 . chapter 1
I think it's great! :)
| Katheryn Mae 3/25/09 . chapter 1
Wonderful. The first bit, mentioning Syr. Universty, had me hooked.
| Anon 3/7/09 . chapter 1
Why is this in the Shakespeare section? You've heard of him, right?
| wannabegg 3/6/09 . chapter 1
OMG totally awesome... I loved ryan and justine and now I love this one... I can't wait to see where it goes... TOTALLY COOL! LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! please update soon... I really really want to read it... did already menshion that I love it... because I do
XOXO GG XOXO
| KrisTWIN 3/4/09 . chapter 1
I'm so excited that you've started this story! I've been waiting forever to hear what happened to Ryan and Justine (one of my favorite couples ever)! Anyway, great chapter, I loved the journal entries, they were so sad and so realistic! Great writing... update soon!
I have some new stories up, please read and review!