Ooh, can I take your story? I might not do a good job, but I wanna try :3 I like Homestuck! :D

Your writing style is SOOOOOOO awesome and unique :3 I'm glad I clicked on this story! You write first-person just like how many people think - they go off on random tangents. May doesn't seem like the type to curse though... :c

LAPKat

are going to continue the stories?

;-)

This story make me crack, when u going to update the next chapter.

Hi :)

First off, it was a nice easy-breezy kind of read. The random thoughts were funny and well, it was just a light kind of feeling. I liked reading about May and Drew's inner thoughts LOL. But they are a LITTLE bit too similar, you know what I mean? Both their characters seemed alike and think similar thoughts.

Anyway.

You had problems with tenses. Constantly describing the thoughts in present tense and then when somebody had dialogue, it would go to past tense. You can check those up.

Nothing else really bothered me. x)

Nice story, hope you continue it soon. :)

-Suzie x

WILL THIS ever BE UPDATED? -_-

Interesting, so is she a new girl? I'm a little confused...

...I honestly have -no- idea how I stumbled across this, but I'm really glad I did xD

This cracked me up. -Alot-. The characters were OOC, but you know what? Screw it. I loved this.

...methinks I'll fave it :D

Blessings,

Vikki

LMFAO. Dayum, I couldn't resist reading this story again xD It's funny how you portray Drew and May - love the pov's DD ... Drew admitted he's a metrosexual? Wow. xD

LMAO ... rocks. On top of each other. Having sex. I'm scarred now. -can't look at rocks the same way anymore- xD

Hm, it's weird how Mr. Stone has a rock fetish :L Honestly, who likes rocks? Other than putting a collar on them and labelling them your pet that doesn't need looking after D (unlike goldfishies T_T)

... if he is such a pro-rock person, why didn't he notice that rocks are always on top of each other having sex? LOL.

Anyways, awesomee chapter ;) TALKIES TO YOU THIS WEEKEND 8)

Please continue the story!

ahahahahaha xDD

THIS. IS. AMAZING!

AHAHAHAHAHA XDD

The fact that both May and Drew think so highly of themselves is very amusing *snickers*

ahahahahah xDD

I really enjoy reading your story!

It's totally brilliant and entertaiing!

This kind of story is my favorite kind of stories! (Did that make sense?)

Nya, what I mean is that the way you write your story and the way the characters think is the kind of story I love.

I don't like those "And then she did this. Then she did that. And then she fell..." stories or those who aren't even written in right gramatic!

"I love she" or "And she did fainted delibarratedly"

Or the ones where they ONLY talk or the authors/-esses write like this "Ohh! Her bf is here! *gg*"

"Ur gr8 & awesome and I luv u so much!"

err, sorry for my rambling back there xD

I hope to read more from you soon!

And let's make a deal. You update like once a week but write short chapters or you update like once every 1/2/3 months but write LONG chapters.

So do we have a deal?

Please?

With a cherry on top?

Or strawberry if you prefer that?

And whipped cream?

Or chocolate sauce?

What about caramel sauce?

You're allergic to that? Oh sorry. What about wildfruit sauce then?

YOu like puppies?

Sorry, I don't have one.

Ok, I'll stop here now xD

Uchiha-Kirara

I'm not jealous of Drew.

I won't go to hell even if you say so Drew.

Outside isn't everything.

Update when you can.

dude that waz awesome!that waz so funny great job:D

XD Drew for the epic win. Looks like May is in for it now. Ha, he's egotistical, but it works. ;) Now... UPDATE. :D

:O UPDATE! I LOVE IT!