Umigoosh! It's ova :'( but it was awesome so it's all good!

I didn't want it to end T_T, but loved it! Loved the epilogue specially, I really like all the kids in the family =D. Great fic and I totally understand why it won so many awards, it is totally one of my favourite fics so far =D.

Okay, I would first of all start by saying you gave me a reason to come home on time! I loved this story and it makes me so sad that I finished it. I actually love the ending. When I think about it, it's hard to belive these are the same two people who met at Sue's. This story wasn't draped in pain, nor was it iced with love. It was PERFECT. I don't know what else to say. Thanks for writing an awesome story? Yeah, that'll work.

This might me my favorite story ever,
Patastic

I don't usually review each chapter, (sorry) But dude, this is super awesome.

...wow. Just wow, man. Awesome. I'll thank my bud for rec'ing.

i kinda feel like i wanna cry 'cause its over :-(! lol i love ur story and im looking fwrd 2 all the rest!

I hate college just for the fact that it won't let me read fanfiction regularly!Anyways, Im so sad this story is over...I loved it from start to finish, this story made me laugh, cry and fall in love with the Jasper and Alice pairing even more. It ended perfectly too!!Thanks for writing this it was AMAZING to read!!

Holy CRAP y'all sifted through a TON of reviews. And you actually did thank EVERY SINGLE REVIEWER. You ladies are freaking crazy, and I love the hell out of you for it.

Rosemary. *snort* Okay, that wasn't a rude snort or anything. No, really. It's just that that's so freaking precious - combining the names of two of the most important women in Jazz's life to create his daughter's name. It's adorable and so Jazz and Alice. I love it.

Oh god. If they're still saying MILF in ten years, I'm giving my children up for adoption so no one ever even considers calling me that. Not that I think I'd be one, but just in case, y'know?

Taylor? As in Lautner? Jordan has good taste.

Tat...tat...tattoo? On... Daddysper? *ded*

Okay, yeah, officially not having children. Or locking the damn door every single night.

Hehehe. Jax has teal eyes. Do so love that. And gee, why would he steal Jordy's skirt? I'm gonna hope not because he wanted to wear it (y'know, for the sake of Jazz's sanity) and go with "because it would set her on a tear and you're her little brother so it's your job to bug the crap out of her".

Again with the nature/nurture debate! Did Jordy get thrown out of that theatre for being Maria's offspring or Alice's progeny? *ponders*

*gasp!* Jasper's going grey? No. Never. Can't happen. I refuse to believe it. I also refuse to believe he didn't know that about high necked shirts. Turtlenecks are a teen's best friend, Jazz. Wait, baby?! Sweet jesus, how many children do those two have?! Was Ashleigh (love the spelling :D) at least planned? lol

Hahahahaha. "They were fun to make." SO Jazz. And undoubtedly very, VERY true.

So wait - did they only find out about Ashleigh after Jazz got fixed, or was she conceived after? Coz I wouldn't put it past the Jazz-Man to have supersperm. lol

A-ha! The towel bars I heard about. Can't imagine anyone hanging towels off those if they had Jasper around. hehe

EW! OLD PEOPLE TRYST!

Well, that answers that question. Supersperm it is! Supersperm from the Super Dad who is a Super Pushover. *shakes head* Probably shoulda kept Nemo, bad cop. Or at least taken him a couple steps away.

Okay, uh, I reitterate -- EW! OLD PEOPLE TRYST! I don't care if Carlisle IS the original DILF and if the mommas are unreasonably purdy for their ages, that's just messed.

*snort* Alice and Alyssa Milano? Oh god. Jasper has the same fantasies as my dad. *shudder*

Okay, did I know Nana Hale's name was Rosemary? If I did, yeah, I forgot. Either way, the name works six ways from Sunday and I'm stickin' with what I said before about it being a hybrid.

I can't believe this is about to be my last comment on this entire story (omigod, that's sad), but can I just say for what is probably the hundredth time by now, I fucking LOVE Jordy! Hahahahahahahahahaha.

Oh man. The final thoughts of Daddysper. Well if THAT thought doesn't bring a tear to your eye, I dunno what will. Wait wait wait... "preconceived notions on Alice"? Plz to elaborate. The only preconceived notion I have on her is that she's hands down the best character in the Saga and comes complete with a world -- hell, several worlds -- of literary opportunity. Anyone who thinks otherwise can bite my shiny metal ass. (Okay, fine, it's neither shiny nor metal, but you know what I'm sayin'.) Your stuff would not suck without Amber - it would just be messy. :P And I fucking LOVE the playlist suggestions, particularly the first one. hehehehe

Okay, I'm going to hell for this, I know it, but whatever -- *dances merrily while singing the first playlist suggestion... then switches it up for a slightly altered version of "Cell Block Tango"* What? The bitch had it comin'!

WHAT?!?! She wants him to be a pallbearer? Fuck no. That's supposed to be done by someone who loved the deceased. I mean, sure, funerals are for the survivors, not the dead, but still... that's a bit much, isn't it?

They SHOULD sing that song. If it wouldn't be all sorts of rude to the little surviving family she has, I'd say Eclipse should release it as their next single and perform it in concert.

Oh god, Jasper storming out in the middle of an argument is giving me Red Line flashbacks. Don't do it, Jasper! Turn back! Turn back! Tell her you love her, dammit!

There ya go, Jazz! Light dawns on marble head. They're HER kids too. *shakes head* At least he learns. Some of 'em never do. And hell, he learns enough to voluntarily sleep on the couch. Smart man.

No, Jordy, the tooth fairy will give you lotsa money for that tooth because she's a filthy rich rock star, not because of where it fell out of your face. :P She's got the whole parenting thing down at such a young age, but teeth? Still lost.

Oh my god. On the one hand, gotta love the honest things that come out of six-year-old mouths... but on the other hand, sweet mother of pearl, that kid has been mindfucked beyond belief if she seriously believes all Jasper does is hurt people. Not to mention actually saying she hopes her mother dies. I know she's been through a LOT, but that's... that's just messed for a six-year-old to actively want something like that. And to want to go to the funeral just to make sure she's really dead. Wow. I've lost count how many times I've been blown away by Jordy and her reactions to things.

Aw! Jordy and her thinking Jasper doesn't love her... *wipes eyes*... Poor little girl.

Ha. "I want a sister now." No worries, Jordan. I'd bet good money you're maybe a half year from having one, judging by Alice's warranted by seriously overemotional reaction to Maria's death, the Breaking Dawn-like yummies hatred, the sudden apple eating (I know, I know, she hates apple PIE, not apples, but she CRAVES them when she's pregnant, dammit), the secretive talking with Bella and Rose... Shall I continue? lol

I think I like this Marcus person.

TOLD YA SO! YET AGAIN, I TOLD Y'ALL SO!!

Ha. Jordy predicts siblings. Interesting nature v nurture argument there. lol

"Can I just say I love make-up sex? Cause I do." So do the readers. *head-desk* Never mind. Y'all are gonna make me never want kids. lol

Oh. Fedorasper returns. *happy shudder*

I was so getting caught up in how adorable the nostalia bit there is, and then you just had to throw in the fact that they're a karaoke band now?? Fuck, that's awesome. Are they on Rock Band too? hehe

If and when I get married, my anniversary damn well better be celebrated like that. That's all I'm sayin'.

Oh, and y'all are dorks with that A/N. *shakes head* Love ya, dorks.

I've been lurking for a month or two, waiting until I'd finished the whole amazing story... OMG!
I think you guys are awesome. I have found myself giggling randomly when in RL someone says something that your cheeky daddysper says and they look at me funny, because there's just no way to explain that the fictional characters in a book have been taken and made into completely new beings, with such rich and detailed backstory that you begin to believe that they are totally more believable than the originals.

('What are you laughing at?', 'um... just something that Jasper said, it was so funny...', 'Who the F...?', 'Oh just these really well written charcters based on a best selling novel... its just completely taken over my life right now that all I can hear in my head is R&K's version of them...', 'uh... ok, whatever' *walks away confused and a little scared*)

I adore your Jasper, he's just so *ugh* and I love how you worked everyone into the story too. I have to say the kids were all so perfect, I took a look at the picture on your blog and *squee* they are so pretty.

Well done ladies, you indeed rool the skool.
much love,
Romana

I don't know whether to :'( or :') because while it's sad that it's over, I'm happy that they got their happily ever after. It's crazy thinking about where they started and how they developed, and you two did an amazing job at developing these two. Forwarding 10 years for the epilogue is a perfect way to end this.. it kind of gives us closure knowing that they're one big happy family. I'm really proud. :)

Congrats on finishing your first story.. I know you two have good things to come!

SO sad to see this story go! It was a great read.

I loved this last chapter. Seeing where they all are ten years later was a lot of fun to read. I love Daddysper and Momalice. All the little details, like them screaming at the kids to get out of the tree, was perfect.

Thanks for sharing this awesome story!

AW that was such a cute ending chapter. Loved it. You should totally do a story for Jordan and Taylor.

I still think Jordy's crush on Edward is the cutest thing ever--not gonna lie, if I were sixteen and Edward was, well himself, yeah I probably won't be able to contain myself, haha--a dirty perv i guess, is what i am!! Thanks for the shoutout at the beginning--you ladies rock and this story was simply amazing!! I can't believe how big their family is--4 kids--DAMN!! Good for them, they all seem very happy :D I again, loved all the dialogue cuz it always seems so natural. And...their parents? A threesome?! HOLY SHIT!! Momma Whitlock hit the jackpot scoring Carlisle, LOL! Not gonna lie--you should TOTALLY do a one-shot if that's true, maybe like a flashback of how it started and more if Alice or Jasper caught them! LOL I'd def. check it out ;) Along with the other stories you ladies will be putting out...sad that it's over, but I really enjoyed it a lot!

Awesome trailer for your story! Sorry I added it to my favorites without even reading it first. But, don't worry, I'm going to right now! It's just that I can already tell that this is my kind of story! That trailer almost made me cry.