well i can say the real edward doesnt say "love" over and over again as a person

i like lily's way of writing a lot more... its unbelievable ... yours sort of stumbles...

and yea

SOB

AWHHS...

Sorry it took me so long to review this!

But it was realyy sweet, and I'm honoured you did a one shot off my story :p

Bella's POV was lovely, a great way to see how the story could have taken a differen path, but if that happened, there wouldn't be much of a story left, would there?

Thanks for doing this, apart from anything else, your Bella POV was really good, and it kinda mirrors what I've done in a draft (which I haven't posted!) Because Bella's POV for me is hard... and I always give too much away ;)

This is great though, I thought Edward's feelings for Bela were a bit abrupt though, but still, it was really good, and a lovely one shot! :)

I noticed a tiny mistake which made me laugh:

'in lobe with your boyfriend but I don’t really know.'

In lobe? Tee he! I think you mean love, but hey, lobe could be a new word!

So yeah, I LOBE this one shot ;)

Can't wait for more of your stories!

Glad I was an innspiration"!

:p

Lily- who's cat is becoming increasingly annoying...