|Reviews for The Truth|
| well 7/26/09 . chapter 1
well i can say the real edward doesnt say "love" over and over again as a person
i like lily's way of writing a lot more... its unbelievable ... yours sort of stumbles...
| oldsoul1964 3/7/09 . chapter 1
| Lily Swan 3/5/09 . chapter 1
Sorry it took me so long to review this!
But it was realyy sweet, and I'm honoured you did a one shot off my story :p
Bella's POV was lovely, a great way to see how the story could have taken a differen path, but if that happened, there wouldn't be much of a story left, would there?
Thanks for doing this, apart from anything else, your Bella POV was really good, and it kinda mirrors what I've done in a draft (which I haven't posted!) Because Bella's POV for me is hard... and I always give too much away ;)
This is great though, I thought Edward's feelings for Bela were a bit abrupt though, but still, it was really good, and a lovely one shot! :)
I noticed a tiny mistake which made me laugh:
'in lobe with your boyfriend but I don’t really know.'
In lobe? Tee he! I think you mean love, but hey, lobe could be a new word!
So yeah, I LOBE this one shot ;)
Can't wait for more of your stories!
Glad I was an innspiration"!
Lily- who's cat is becoming increasingly annoying...