You betrayed Mat! He told me about you trick him and giving him a good review and then reporting him! You are a major ** and I hate you! But I support mat, I will help him destroy your account you traitor! I am helping mat with his self insertions and I love his self inserts! They are very cool and you are a bad writer for not understanding and his self insert is not a gary stu!

And mat is not a pervert like yuna luna said he is with her stupid pshycologhy crap, that latino **! Mat just likes to imagine and write about wet girls in swimsuits he's not a pervert!

I will help mat to destroy you and dr facer and mirai vegeta and you can't stop me because YOU CAN'T REPORT ANON REVIEWS **! Mat and I will kill your account! So go to hell **!

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comments: i found this fic after reading a matter of force (as far as you had written anyway) your a good author but you should really finish one fic before starting another. i couldn't believe that with 45 fics 44 are still in the process of being written

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comments: This my first time reading a Ranma 1/2 fic, so I don't have too much to offer except to fix the formatting. Other than that, you did a great job and I look forward to future stories.

I was certainly rather amused by this fanfic...although I am VERY curious to see a next chapter. I mean having to help Akane with her 7th wedding?! Yeesh, that's got to take some seriously absurd stuff!! I DO hope you continue this. It was pretty good ^_^

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I remember reading this fic so long ago and I still like it today. This is one of the few ways Ranma would say those words first to Akane. But I wonder what would happen if Carrot and Dan chose different characters' powers today... _

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looks like a one-shot..but what if you did more chapters on them going to other anime's *points at the end where Dan an Carrot are listing all the girls they got*

Carrotglace,

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comments: Would really have liked the scenes that took place before the epilogue filled in. I think they'd be more entertaining than any fic that has Akane as one of the main characters.
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=THANK YOU!-COME AGAIN SOON!= Ja-ne

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comments _Needed gratuitous WAFF_

damn carrot another excellent story. i almost forgot it was you that wrote this. couldn't really notice any changes at all from the first release of this i saw, which just goes to show how good your writing was, even back then

No, 11+, No, Yes, Poor, Good, Good.

I really wish you would have gotten rid of the ⌠,■ things. I think a quick run through with find/replace would do it, and it would really make this a lot better looking.

Damn Damn it! You killed Lin Lin and Ran Ran! They were just a couple of kids, and they were cute!

1) Yes
2) 30 minutes (because she was watching anime)
3) Yes
4) Excellent
5)It's my bathroom! (but yes, it's clean)
6) Very awesome!

I almost died when I realized what Carrot was doing halfway through the story! xDD When he finally played the recording of Ranma saying it, I couldn't sit straight anymore. Awesome work as usual!

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comments: Quite good. It feels like something those of us who watch fanfiction would actually do.

Heck, I remember reading this the first time you released it. It still deserves sequels rather than an epilogue.