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"hard & smooth, but too fast to enjoy the ride" great line!
better line: "I promise you will enjoy the ride"

Fantastic chapter - enjoyed it most!!
Aly

a beaded elephant made and from S. Africa & an "i love David" tag.

I love the poems/songs between OG & Debussy!!
Op, she has stage fright - interesting. I turn such a bright color of red on my neck and face - embarrasing. I can totally get her fear of large crowds! You wrote it well
Aly

Wonderful way of retelling Tw - I like it very much - I absolutley loved eye color conversation at end - great story
Thanks, Aly

Thank you for a wonderful story!

I generally don't like A/H...but this one ROCKS!! (pun intended...lol)

Great chapter -- love the intensity. From their words to each other as D88/OG which segued perfectly into a great love scene to the concert -- it's all good! Love the band dynamics -- they keep focusing the attention on Bella, and feed off each other's energy. And how cool is it tht the BB is coordinating with Bella -- sweet! Jessica breaking Victoria's nose - priceless...

Oh, love that end! And pretty much the entire chapter... esp. of course Bella's telling Edward she loves him. And Jane's reaction to B&E kiss, cute! Love the group's interactions while they're listening to the other groups-- Bella and Edward sitting together, Jasper going over music, Alice blowing bubbles, Emmett and Esme playing cards -- nice! And Victoria's confession to Rose was sad and creepy ...but still think she should be charged for spiking the drinks and battery of Bella.

Love the beginning! Edward's declaration from BPOV; Charlie's reaction to Bella's shirt; Emmett's slap on the back which leads to discovery of the drugged drink; James being arrested -- yay! I like that when they learn what James has been up to, both Charlie and Edward want to do the same thing: kick James' ass. Also Carlisle's reaction is so good to Charlie's asking him, "and if it was your child?" And no surprise that Victoria was in all the dirty deeds with James, hopefully Bella isn't seriously injured. Nice that Jane was involved in finding Bella -- with the lemonade cap no less! Hopefully Bella is not really out of the competition...

Amazing chapter -- things to love: details of each person's activities while waiting for things to get started; Edward nudging Bella's hand to continue petting his hair - sweet; during the intros Bella forgets she's part of Am. Nomad!; vandalizing James' list of songs; Edward's musings about Bella's bravery; Bella's bit of snarkiness while waiting for James to get on stage and esp. her antics during the song; Edward's pride while watching Bella perform ... and of course the end. Nice that now E&B aren't rock star and groupie (well, they really never were, except in Bella's thoughts), but true equals...

Things to hate: James, James, James

Love the forest scene even more now! It's a bit sad that they both feel they've lost their confidante -- and love the song/poem they write to each other, as well as Bella's reaction to E's.

Laurel's advice was interesting ... I hate the thought of Bella touring anywhere with James, and dammit, I want to have her sing with Edward and the others at the festival.

Great ending...

Lovely chapter. Love the piano scene from BPOV and her thoughts as she is singing the song she shouldn't know, realizing who D88 -- perfect. At first I was disappointed that Bella didn't stay with Edward so they could go over what is a pretty amazing discovery about each other, but the forest scene is perfect, as are their thoughts in the days leading up to it, so glad you didn't go with the obvious. Also enjoyed Emmett's revelations and nice that Rosalie was listening.

And all I had to do go guess the riddle of P88PMM was to turn my laptop upside down -- nice!

Seriously, This Bella reminds me of myseld. Its kind of creeping me out, lol.

I dont really eat in the mornings.

Seriously, Iv always wanted to have sex to this song.

This song is pure sex. The moaning at the end. GAH.

I like tea most of the time.