That was fan fucking tastic! The way she had the crowd from go and the way they loved her and barely tolerated James. He could be so good, if only he could get past his ego. Hilarious. And, OH. MY. GIZZY! He said I love you . . . so unexpected and so wonderful! And, what little loophole did our lil' Alice find in those rules she was studying so hard on there at the beginning. Please have her have a way to sing with them . . . please.

My first received ILY was from my ex-fiancé. Met senior year of high school, fell in love, agreed to get married. Three years later, thankfully before marriage, I did not want him forever anymore. I did not even want him at all. So glad I grew up!

From the library to the woods and up until him telling her to put her paties back on was nothing but poetry. Your writing is just vivid in my mind and so unbelievably clear. The gift you have is very appreciated with this fan. Also, loved the ending with D_88 and O_G's conversation . . . just delicious.

Although, I am a giant fan of so much music . . . and rather eclectic, I have no idea what to suggest for Bella. Good thing you've finished this, so my suggestion is not even needed. LOL

Sweet, sweet torture you deliver us to read. Delicious. Hello Spark . . . beautiful.

Favorite leftover? Chinese food.

She put it together and yet, she speaks nothing of it to him but mixed words and mumbles. You confuse me so. I like how it is playing out. I hope what happened in the first demo of Bella and James is very evident in the actual festival. James was trying too hard to be the star and he kept going all over Bella in the song. Instead of how the band and her mesh with her complimenting them and vice versa. Did I explain that good enough? I hope so. Glad they got all of their stuff back from the flash drive. And, I had suspected as much that it was not as good as they remembered it to be. The fact that all of them think Bella makes it better is heartwarming. This is coming to an end soon and there is soooo much left. Yikes! Onwards . . .

Lightbulb? I don't have a joke, but the Minions on the Despicable Me 2 trailer for this summer's release of them changing a lightbulb cracks me up.

So Tanya is gay, and she did want Edward, but they just never did because she did not feel comfortable getting to that level with him. I hope I followed that correctly. Still thinking that James was the one attempting to drug Bella, but still unclear as to the reason behind it. Unless Edwards theory to Alice was correct and he wanted her to sing. That was most certainly the wrong way to do it. Odd really. I am glad they have the flash drive and the password. Whether or not she left it alone remains to be seen. Through you O_G poem, she will be a mermaid . . . to his sailor . . . Alice is brilliant in that his costume went with both Tanya's and Bella's, if I am correct. I wonder if that will jar him into realizing they are D_88 and O_G?

My best Halloween costume was actually my husbands . . . I painted his face to look just like Darth Maul from the Star Wars films . . . I got tons of accolades on it at the costume party we went to and he won first place!

He is so caught in himself he can't see with clarity. She the same. I'm beginning to wonder if they do belong together. Hmmm? Funny that Jasper and Emmett think Tanya does not like boys . . . if she wasn't touching them when they were together . . . then why all the fuss now. I guess she was his only girlfriend, before Bella, and it was five years ago when his mom was still alive? You've not really clarified that in here.

Scary thing, I have no idea what my blood type is . . . and I'm forty-five for crying out loud. I should find that out.

I just knew he was too young to have concocted a plan. "Hey Bella, Tanya just told me that she has had my back up flash drive this whole time. She said that I need to take her to the Halloween party as a couple, on a date, with pictures. Once the pictures are up on FB she will give me the password. You will come to school tomorrow in a fit of anger and break up with me . . . I will then in retaliation ask Tanya, publicly, for a date to the Halloween party, you storm off. We do this together. I get my password and you are not hurt in the process by her machinations." Problem solved . . . a sixteen/seventeen year old boy would never think that through like this. I absolutely loved her description of The Phoenix. I would hope that Alice or Jasper would recite that back to Edward . . . then he would know what she was really speaking of. Again, lack of communication between these two teenagers. I guess it is expected . . . some adults can't even grasped that communication is key in any relationship and they are much older.

Twilight obsession. Obsession in my world of fan-fiction and wanting to constantly read of Edward and Bella falling in love over and over again.

That bitch Tanya! I can't believe she is doing that to him . . . well yes, I can. She is a selfish scorned little child that thinks she can get a man by holding him hostage. She has not yet learned the lesson that you don't want a man that does not want you and yearns for another. A lesson all of us women have learned through the years. I am actually sad for her . . . when she learns this lesson soon, she will be tortured by it. Edward too, is very young . . . he may not make the right decision here . . . poor Bella. Ugh.

A much skinnier version of my own self to see if there really is a difference, or if it is just in my mind.

Oh. My. Gizzy . . . he finally asked her out! Yay! Of your four stories going on here in this story of yours, I am looking forward to more on the love story and the online story. The drug story has been so set aside, that it is almost forgotten and her stage fright seems to be waning . . . yay!

Kill Jessica, fuck Lauren and marry Angela. Actually, Jessica and Lauren are interchangeable . . . but Angela stays put. LOL

So glad that they finally talked to each other . . . huh, imagine that they are on the same page . . . communication works people. LOL. So, pretty lucky girl . . . ODBF accepted all three of the applications with her singing on them. Now, if only the girl did not suffer so badly from stage fright. Ha!

What am I afraid of? This earth without my husband in it. Although I am very independent, he is my whole world. To no longer have his very animated, loving, amazing self . . . I would be so lost and fear would lose my independence.

Holy crap! She did it . . . YAY! So proud of her, of them all. That was fantastic. Perhaps, she would go on a date with you Edward, if you ask her properly! "Do you want some?", does not constitute as a proper date request. She really had no idea why he was so mad, because he was all up in his noggin' and not using his words. Ugh. Funny ending sentence . . . I hope she lets it be known that he never asked her out on a date, merely asked her if she wanted ice cream.

It is currently still in the eighties here at my house, and it is ten thirty at night . . . that is hot for where I live . . . San Francisco peninsula area where forty to sixty is normal at night.

Both of them fighting so hard to not give the other control was so great . . . especially the bathroom part turning into the literal climax of the little war. Your words are awesome. The smoky bedroom mini-jam session with nothing but fun times was great. So laid back and chill. Looking forward to the practice sessions getting her ready for that eventual stage.

I like the word vernacular for a "v" word.

Charlie had a way of testing James and that he failed . . . that was funny. Glad he is aware that something is up with James, just in case something happens to his daughter. I still really love your poetry and these two with their online endevours, can't be much longer on that though. Love the song sessions . . . no matter who she is singing with!

Dishes are the husbands job . . . ha!

Detention for kissing? What has happened to high school? We kissed all the time in school . . . confused. Very odd that James is so friendly with Rose and Emmett, but most likely the culprit. Unless, you want us to assume that and you will throw a wrench and it be someone out of left field. Will wait and see. I like that Edward is trying to keep this hush-hush. I hope it doesn't lead to putting another person in a vulnerable situation though.

I know it's cliche, but I still like Closer by Nine Inch Nails. Good song.

Thank you so much by starting this off the way you did by explaining that no, she was not clueless, yet quite the observant one. His POV absorbing the guilt of her being hurt by each of these girls, the ones he was nice to, the ones who took as much as got, was so painful to him that it brought him to tears . . . nearly brought me right along with him. Letting Bella handle this with her very own strength was perfect! Loved every single encounter you set up. Him landing one, right on her, there in the middle of the cafeteria, priceless. You are awesome . . . YAY!