Ah...wonderful! Can't wait for the next chapter! It's 1 am abd I'm reading this chapter...and it's October, way too many weeks have passed. I should've read it sooner!
~ chu chu

I know the feeling of letting go someone you really cared for. In Fate’s case, she lost the person how gave meaning to her existence, her pillar, her strength, her everything…

Life goes on, I guess…

Hayate is looking out for Fate cause if left alone she probably do something really stupid.
Fate doesn't like relying on others but sometimes you have to if you want to live

you hardly see any fics with Nanoha confessing her love first.
crap why does Nanoha have to play hero all the time?
so much sadness

Right. Fine. I read it before I left, at the airport... Couldn't resist.
Two weeks would be wayy too long a wait, anyway. 8D

Sonreir, huh. *rolls eyes / smiles wryly / grins*
And the Tower? *grins moar*
Pretty ironic *amused* But yes, it was definitely a good read. You're right: it depressed me.

I swear, you are totally writing an autobiography *amused* I'm pretty sure I've heard some of the sentences before when you told me... random stuff *grins*

As usual, awesome update. 8D Still love the style after so many months. *muses*

And argh I gtg, my friends are rushing me. -_-;
I'd leave a longer review if I could, but blah. Sorry!

And eh. I almost forgot.
Thanks so much for the fic! 8D
I totally wasn't expecting anything before you told me. ;P

Well, seeyou when I get back, and thanks again!

PS: What the heck, no 'Awesome One' reference? *rolls eyes*

- the Awesome One. 8D

i have just reread the first part since i really coundlt remember even the name of this fic here. and i remembered that i like it.

sorry that your friend died. its always sad when someone close to you dies but i gotta say that this came out quite well. i have this little note book that i write in. its filled with quotes from different books and fanfics that are funny, emotional, deep, or have life lessons in them like the one about regret you have in here. i have more or less copied Nanoha's entire little speech there so i hope you don't mind (but really, your opinion doesn't matter lol). anyway, gg gonna read your other stuff now.

Its so touching! Dont delete... :(

I'm sorry about what happened.

I really like this because I could see a lot of raw emotion. It's poetic to me and I like how it flows. Overall, even though I haven't read enough of your work, I don't believe this to be your worst.

Take as much time as you need.

Corrections (I know it's unbeta'd, but I figured that I point them out for you):

"An album of sorts, it's cover of soft velvet, is on top of it." Its.

"So why is it that if's and else is all she could think about?" Shouldn't if's be it's?

You don't know...but you kinda did. It was a good way vent huh? Good story. I doubt you were looking for reviews when you wrote it though. Your friend left you kick ass advice. Why hesitate when you can take a chance and make it work?

Wow, intense. This piece is overflowing with emotions and here's a reader who hope to see a continuation of this.

p.s. sorry to hear about your friend, hope you're feeling better already.

This is really, really sad. I'm kind of tearing slightly cause part of the story relates to a bit of what I feel at the moment.

My favourite part was the one where Nanoha was outside Fate's door. I don't know why but that part was just really intense to me, maybe it's the imagery, or maybe it was the words Nanoha said that I can relate to. Idk, I can just really imagine them in that position really well.

Well, as usual my suckyness at words kicks in, and I don't know what to say. I think you'll know what I want to say though, so...

Take care, and keep smiling.

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*pokes* And I'm always here if you need to talk, or rant, or ruffle, or even /bully/, sigh. (You know you do!)

Well, it is late over here, but I did want to leave a short review. I enjoyed this story, maybe because it encompasses a fate of "what could be" or "what has been" for some couples of people that have a similar love scenario: One that knows for sure it's love, the other who gets confused and pushes the other away despite the connections in the past, present and future.

I'm glad to say that I've only had half of the experience in this fic (the other half being that one person has passed away), but thoughts of regret have popped up at one point or another. I had a nice connection with Nanoha in this fic, thank you.

Tenkaichi

Keep going.

QUOTE:
I don't know where I'm going with this. Honestly, I don't. I don't even know what I'm writing, only that I am. I see no start nor end and...

I only read because you put emotions, combining the mind with the heart. You don't have to write something with a purpose. Just write what and when you want. I'll always read your work.
I'm truly sorry for ur friend. I'm in a similar situation here.