Awesome fic!

I love this story. Well written job, good teamfic bonding, plus the banter was totally believable. I'm adding this to my favs list!

This is now my favourite Leverage story! Funny as hell! Good work

DUDE! This is one funny chapter, I just love embarrased!vindictive!Eliot. And Hardison! Talking with a broken nose - priceless

Awesome! I would love to see another from you

=D Good job, it felt like the show.

I don't get Sheridan and Sinclair...Highlander?

This fic is amazing! The dialog in the first chapter was spot on and had me laughing out loud. You've got skills and your characterization is perfect and you had a great balance of all the characters being involved. And one of the most difficult things, I think, is the con. You set up a great one. I hope you're writing more Leverage fics! (I'm not worthy!)

Totally awesome story. It's so incredibly well-written and developed, and absolutely hilarious. You do a great job with all the characters. I love it, can't wait for more.

Wow. That was really good! Well written, obviously, but also interesting and funny and pretty damn spot on with the characters. I look forward to reading your other fics!

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It took me a chapter to get on board, although I loved the Babylon 5 reference, but I thoroughly enjoyed Chapter 2. The is fic is very clever and I love all of your characterizations.

Two seconds after that, when Eliot ducked around a cop like he wasn’t there, Alec realized he was going to make it a chase and that was just vindictive, was what it was. With a heartfelt, “man”, Alec ran after him.
Perfect Hardison. I love the banter here between he and Elliot.

Parker carefully removed the Popsicle from her mouth, drew a breath and began a monotone report that was disturbingly similar to a school report. "Eliot stole a purse and Hardison caught him. Then Eliot hit him.” As an afterthought – clearly only in the interests of full disclosure - she added, “And someone's grandmother tasered Eliot. It was very funny. The end."

You have a great command of the characters. This comment from Parker hit the nail on the head of her quirkiness.

Great job, LithiumDoll. I look forward to chapters 3, 4, and beyond!

Awesome story! Now do we get Flaco's story as the sequel?

Wow, this is one of the first Leverage fics that I have found where the characters actual feel like the real thing! Love it!

rotflmao! parker you poor dear! i love eliot getting back at her about having to steal the coffee maker though...she's so happy about having to steal something in a prison and then nate tells her to steal that!

"He could only imagine the kind of hell the two could rain down without his calming influence." oh goddess...eliot and parker on their own...without nate, but still in contact *buries head and holds on for one heck of a ride*

*winces* oh eliot promising favors not a good idea sometimes.

i do love his response to parker after he finds out she's fine--his reassurance--"you've never been caught. now come get me the hell out!"

woot! nate...tick off the man holding you hostage.

*giggles* i love parker "hi!" and then eliot cold cocking the guy! they work so well together *hugs them both*

*giggles* yes don't hold a gun on sophie! it tends to ** everyone off.

LOL them arguing over prison break!

please, please tell me you're going to write flaco's job? that was awesome! totally awesome!

btw--in case you haven't guessed...i wrote comments as i read.

this "Eliot shrugged philosophically and went to get changed; the pants were way too big. And the tee itched. And they’d taken his beanie. Someone was going to hurt for this." was priceless...its losing his beanie that is gonna get someone hurt--i laughed for like two minutes after reading that line!

and i also love the with complete sincerity "he fell down"--geeze eliot...you couldn't think of something more original?

great job--keep going!