Have no fear, a long review is near. I'm famous for them actually. Okay to start with, I like the squarry thing to break apart the chatter. I'm kind of confused to know what year Harry is in, and I'm guessing Squeaky is in first because you said something about being able to join next year. I thin it's cute that Harry has suddenly seemed to fall for her so quickly! They really seem to have a lot in common, coming from a muggle family, being afraid of being left behind in their studies, liking quidditch. I wonder how Ron and Hermione are going to react to Harry's sudden falling. I hope you update soon. I know how important it is for your readers to review and give good long reviews, I always end up begging for reviews on my stories, even though I say to myself when I'm writing it, I will not beg for reviews lol.

Desiree'