Short but terribly sweet all the same. Thought the visuals were great!

I shudder to think what damage John is doing to his shoulder :) I greatly enjoyed the interaction between Ronon and John, and how Ronon was channeling his other team members. Thank you for sharing.

Wonderful, thank you for sharing. Even though it was only Sheppard and Ronon there you still managed to portray the teams influences and it was a really nice touch. Really good characterisation too, you write Sheppard and Ronon very well :)

aww thats cute hehe i really like Sheppard and Ronon stories.

Excellent. I've always felt that Ronon knows John the best. Wonderful interaction. Hope to see more John/Ronon stories from you.

Great moments between Ronon and John. I especially like the ending where we see the Rodney and Teyla "in" him.

Very nice litle one shot! I love this kind. And, it's so good to see you're still writing SGA!

Excellent:D

great story glad ronon was there for him he needed him :)

Nice! Great dialog between Ronon and Sheppard.
And I loved the last two lines!