its quite like the gobstones onencos sirius said can i try something?

Nah, maybe he'll pass...you could write a companion fic where they terrify James by invoking the law, that would be funny. Only then you'd have to sort of second-hand describe a lot of smut, and what I love about your fics is that they don't feel the need to spell out every excruciating detail.
As always, I loved the interactions in this piece, and the style in which you chose to tell Remus's story. I now have a criticism of your work as a whole (yes, you should be trembling in your shoes right now.) Maybe it's just my fault for reading only the Sirius/Remus oneshots, but I find that they all follow basically the same pattern. They hang out, pretend to be gay, find out they are gay, kiss sweetly and that's the end. Which is cool, because it's a good pattern and I'm not tired of it yet, but try to vary it a bit. I never get sick of their joking around though, you have witty dialogue down to a fine art.

LOVED IT! The epilogue was hilarious! =D

Hahahahahahahahaha...nice...

The whole story was funny, but the last line KILLED me with laughter.

Hah! Excellent! *Grins happily* Yes, sleep-deprived seems to be the best way to write. I loved it! And am now feeling hyped up. On bananas. Goodbye! Uh, good story!

LMAO! This is smashing... I mean, considering I don't normally read anything but M ratings, I really REALLY enjoyed this! The last line especially. XD
And I hope you got some sleep; I know how the fanfiction urge to write at ungodly hours on no sleep is...
Anyhoozer, great fic! I think it deserves a place in the favourites :D

I want to! It was very cute!

Way cute! If you hadn't said so I never would have guessed when you wrote it. Sirius was perfect. They were all perfect. :) *high-five*

this story is full of remus and sirius goodness! :)
love it!

That was great! Funny and sweet! Glad you added the last bit! LoL ^.^

Good and very funny. “I thought she was just itchy or something” - that is so Remus. I even like Arabella, she seems to have a sense of humour – “I may as well become a nun. A lesbian nun." And she knows when she’s beaten, unlike some I could name. I have to love your irrepressible Sirius - "Are... they a lesbian? Because that's not an obstacle. It's just really hot." And the way he keeps touching Remus. And how, even before the revelation, Sirius and Remus are so at ease with each other, as if, unconsciously, they both know they belong together.
The last line is brilliant.

Haha loved it, fantastic.

XD I love it! I love reading get-together stories, and this is really well written :D Sirius being, well, serious about love and saying so to Remus, and touching him all the time

I love the Hi...Going to go...piss...now. you mean you don't want to invoke the new Marauder Law part.
And you taught me a new word. Debauchery. I knew the word, just not the definition. lol
Luvz,
Gwen
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