it was just plain cute.

ah! i love the way you write your stories in a time-progressing way. it's just makes the story more interesting. i love this! shikamaru was shikamaru, and ino was ino. GREAT JOB

God it's so cute!

haha...

loved it!

awh that was soo cute!

“Don’t tell me it didn’t reach the right person. I have an IQ of two hundred. I know I’m right.”

OHH. SHIKA! very cute. loved it. :D

cute...

they are so cute together... so was this story

Love this. It is so cute!

So sweet. My first prediction of this story flunked up to the last sentence. You really had me there. This story is really something. Nice to read especially. Loved it.

So cute. I adored the abstract sort of structure too, it's different but in a really good way, sometimes when people write in too short sentances it gets tedious but this wasn't, it was perfect.

cute. i love shika!

That is such an adorable idea, it makes me want to write one for that special person (whom I unfortunately have not found yet). It was a wonderful story and it had me grinning and feeling "fluffy" until the end. The format was really interesting too, I wish I could write P. Good luck in the future!

-Stephy

Aww! That was so cute! You shoudl deffinently write more! . I loved it!

whew, so much fluffiness! cute!

thank you for this story... it made me smile _v

ahh what a sweet story! it made me all aw and melt-ish inside. i adored it! completely, utterly enjoyed it.

please, more shikaino fics in the future kay?

nice