Wuh. Man. I love this. I just, I don't know where to start. XD

I really like Kaname's reasons for being King. Kinda reminds me of when Bloody Mary became Queen of England, and next, Elizabeth. They just were. Hopefully, though, Kaname will do better at ruling than either of them. Haha.

I also really like the goose-girl story, and I can't wait to see how that story progresses. Also, it makes me want to watch Princess TuTu again.

Also,I'm not pretending this story is truth, I BELIEVE it. And now I sound like Naruto, gosh darn it.

End Note: I would like to make mention that "kinda" is an accepted word. Who knew?

Thank you for the opportunity to read such a mature and original story .In my opinion one of the best in Vampire Knight fandom : vibrant, skillfully constructed and psychologically credible .Please continue

this is a beautiful story
please continue!

Hii, here again, I hope you are going well with your health, last week I was sick too, so I understand.

The true is that I was waiting for your update as water in the desert. Now that I already red some chapters I understand how things are going to be, and I love it. your writing skills are quite different of I usually find so I have to change my "routine" you know...it's just that nowadays I feel so afraid and frustrated when most of English fics (and fandoms) are bashing Zero and the Spanish ones, Kaname (I’m from Spain), so in one side I have "Rosa de Sangre" and in the other hand I have you, and both give me my happy pace in my Triada ship.

For me she is Yuuki Kuran-Cross & Kiryuu.

(that's because I don’t care anymore about the confirmed tragic end in the manga), but don’t worry, I don’t want to push you, whatever way this story are going to turn, I gonna read it 'till the end and keep in my fav's. I also have recommended this fic in the Forums VK I usually join, and this week I finally have become a "writer" ( I never write outside of essays to university) of fic VK (something I could ever dream before, it was just a surprising muse and a low level of my big problem with procrastination) and its supposed to be about the old Kuran kings and their book which will guide our 3 heroes, and this last chapter of yours have inspired me when I will have to speak about monarchy, and so. With your credit and permission, of course. (Thank you)

About the Chapter,
my word is: Impressive, really, Yuuki is the centre of everything, its really funny to see that is she who "decide" where to go and do, it gives her point and makes her stronger (as it supposed to be, in the anime she is more" lady in distress, very different from the manga), and I like it. then about clothes for Zero, wow, Aido leading the stuff, he ban be so funny, and to see Zero wears "nice" jackets and trousers... *drooling a bit* now he is bit more in the group "we might at least try and help him look like he belongs with us", so then the picture is very elegant... and how Zero reacts to the words of Yuuki so humble and quiet is unexpected but I supposed it's the love *great* and then "We should all be friends": good for you Yuuki!!

Kain advised calmly. "We've all got to do our best to get used to new things."-> He is as casual as always, I love you Kain, but when are you going to step in with Ruka *grins*
About Cartels and Interpol surprising and understandable, and then “Zero audaciously sat down at a table with Yuki and Kaname”: well, they are who they “is”. But, is zero not going to eat? I feel worried… and then ; so you are not so snob... Good!

With the post card, jeje, Zero and Yuuki biting brotherly back, as always, they are such a pair in those moments… and don’t worry Zero, Kaname doesn’t see your feelings as a weakness.
“She needed... Zero”; of course Yuuki, you just needed time to realize, don’t you?.. And Kaname, are you “happy” now, did you ever think it was going to be “on plan” always? You still have to learn a lot of things in life. Now is time to show yourself to others as the caring and sweet person who is behind the mask.

About the King matters, its astonishment, I never found anyone yet who believed to give a reason more than “I’m a Kuran”, thank you: “A king simply is” so simple sentence that is difficult: it’s easier to rambling and to think always more complicated and less strong reasons to write. But I think is proper from Kaname and his “ancestor essence” skills.
Then a church, quite a game: vampires and a church.

Finally, Once again, the 3 of them, as a truth on itself.

Thank you and update as fast you can please. [LJ] I already waiting for a Real and longer than 5 minutes Zeka conversation without “mystery” as in the Academy, one of those crucial moments that every fan are waiting in the manga.
Take care, See you then.

I'm always happy when I receive an e-mail with an update from your story. I enjoy reading them as much as I would any beloved novel - probably more so because you write so well. I find myself contemplating your story even after I have finished reading it. It has the power to make you think, something that so many stories lack, and I always enjoy reading each chapter many more times then just once. I hope you feel better Gabi-Hime! Thank you for yet another lovely chapter.

I think I must be remarkably stupid because I don't understand the significance of the goose-girl story. I see Yuuki as the goose-girl, of course, but I do not see who the princess is if that is the case.

But, as for the rest of the story, it was delightful ^_^ I am so hideously torn between my desire for KanamexYuuki and my love for Zero as a single character. I hope you won't make this a threesome though... I think it suits the story the way it is now.

Poor Kaname though, I do empathise with him, having to share Yuuki with Zero... *sigh* Kaname is my favourite fictional character ever, so I get kinda obsessive about him :P

I loved Aidou, and the scene in the church. It was very prettily done and I eagerly await your next update. XD

If Yuuki is the goose girl, or at least I am assuming she is, who is the maid? And who is the king? Well, it was a lovely chapter. Is it called LESSON ONE: The Ocean because of the vast information you gave out?

The first time I had the pleasure of finding your work was back in 2002 when I got obses...I mean interested, in Angelic Layer.

Your works with the fandom made me beleive that even among very badly written stuff there was always a hidden treasure to be found... or in your case, several (I'm still engaged with "Seasons in the Sun" and "Public Relations" by the way :D )

Now that I have decided to get into VK universe, I got ecstatic to find that you had also written something for it! And as expected I was not dissapointed.

Your narrative and flow has changed over the years and has morphed into something very.. well, you, really. Particular and good. It gives a good amount of information, not overwhelming and just enough to give the reader the freedom to imagine what is left unsaid.

And the characters interact fluidly with each other (and also they are very in character!)

Great work!

Hope to see much more from you!! :D

Oh and the plot goes on...
I loved it!

Update soon!
~Ashlyn

Hi again,,
i just foget it to write:
dont' worry i be patient, of course CA is a secondary matter and dont get me wrong ok?
besh wishes,

So touching!
Great chappie :D

I love this fan fic, so please update soon

Wow you write really well and the plotline is really interesting but one thing it's pairing you wrote Kaname X Zero X Yuuki (so is there gonna be Kaname X Zero in the story? you know a threesome perhaps?)
*that would be hot nd there not many stories with them as a threesome with each other.*
This chapter was written really well with the letters and all them people writing to Yuuki. it was sweet.
continue writing and update soon ;D

hi agin,,
wow, i have just finished to read this chap ter and its just beatifull. it's a little awkward of my self but in true is i'm right now crying (and is something quite difficult).. it's just is so beatiful.. so many wishes and enouragments of the people who cherish Yuuki.. there is nothing can i add appart of the letters on themselves...
it was quite strange the letter from Maria, only just 'cos i did'nt imagine her speaking of such things, but it's true that we only know her "concern" for Ichuri, oh¡ wait.. she was who "witnessed" the concil the atack and thus, so i shall to keep on it... is just that i have the old image who indirectly gave us shizuka on the academy,, u know,,

Finally, thinking again about the "Grand Tour", now with all the toumuls revealed and everything i think is better to keep going outside of home as needed it might be (is just in the 2 first ch the feeling given about to travel it was a little bit odd),
I realize is an advatage 'cos in that that i believe this gonna give them the pace to arrange themselves in their Complex relation, which is already a full time job¡ jeje.
Likely, if they have influencies (don't confusse with knowleage)from External issues too much near them,it could put them out of their current focus; they are going to need ,as i see, a lot of strengh to get their goals on this "litte buble", to have to obligue divinding this as said at same time, it wasn't even healthy... and by the way, some time ago i watched in the news that ice sculture party, ¡it's really amanzing!

waiting soon, bye

LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, it's all what they need,

I love so much your story and it's so difficult to find a story which shipS the 3 of them (since Crimson Door of Blackened Wing)... (now it's on fashion to kill zero, yuuki has no word on her own life and looks like some kind of pureblood robot or/and Kaname is a perv possesive guy.*fell empty that that wrongs visions* ¡those people don't feel the canon¡.)

c'mon they are of course really nice people who have been suffer too much and need a rest while rediscover themselves again, understanding things and each other and to look to the future. they are simple destinated to be together.

they deserve happiness and to share family and feelings it's just wonderful. they are not three; they are only One.

Divided (in all possible ways) they suffer and have doubts. they feel incomplete (specially Yuuki) for many reasons.

Zero, Yuuki & Kaname together are simple as strog as a mountain, they are an imponent group to defeat if someone dare to. they just can face the whole world and win 'cos they are together..that's is. and aido and company need to know who really is Zero. *wanna see it*

i dont need k/z in this story, it's not neccesary 'cos it's not canon... they are happy loving the same girl and she is happy having the both of them with her...and the boys have to learn to be as something near as friends doing the perfect shield if somebody wants to hurt her, there is noone who knows all sides of yuuki better than them and she can teach them how is really is the other guy to begin to apreciate the other guy as a good person independently of being a hunter or a vampire, making full circle and will be interesting to see how they learn the other side of his girl.

i'm sure that if the boy are agree *yuuki's team* in something as to go some place or doing *silly or not* things.., yuuki simply cannot change or do anything in the conversation, funny isnt?

by the way, are you going to explore only they relatioship? and travel all the time(this,with trains and so, is something i just dont like; i miss the enviroment they know) Or once they are strong between them, are you going to put them in the situations with the chaos on vampire world? yuuki is gonna gain some powers?

what about the chairman? the night class?, sara shirabuki? rima and shiki? takuma is lost...Ichi-Ou can be still alive.. you know... all that... It would be really nice to see how they are going to face all the Waiting things once they are get on well each other and to be able to see how they kick ** hahaha,

please dont stop this story, it's nice.
thank you.