-nods at reason to dislike Kataang- totally agree. -nods again- yes very much.

lol sparks. :P

This is so true. I really can't see Katara and Aang together. Ever. It just seems to forced and Katara treats him too much like a brother/son. Plus they really do have a great friendship. Loved that you addressed it here.

Oh lol. I loved Toph here. She was all that was hilarious, what with calling them names again!

I loved Aang's and Katara's friendship conversation. It was really sweet. :)

Very cute; I absolutely loved it. You are so right. There is an annoying shortage of Katara/Aang friendship. You did a great job of showing that as well as flaunting the supremely amazing Zutara and Taang. Keep it up!

Cute!

4/5

co(:$:)co

Now THAT'S the way a de/reconstruction of Canon to Fanon ships should go: respectfully and with good reasons. ^_^

Anyways, as for Main Characters: I'd say that it seems that Aang is the Main main character, since it's all told from his perspective.

Again, this was a really great read. You wrote Aang and Katara SO well, and it was nice to read a Zutara/Taang fanfic where neither of them are the bad guy.

Plus? Zutara baby? ADORABLE!

Taang smex in the guest bed room? AWESOME!

A fantastic story! And you're right, that's what always bugged me with kataang too. That and Katara was always mothering him...it just struck me as creepy >__>; Oedipus complex much? XD
Anyways, fantastic writing as per usual! You are still one of my favorite zutara/taang writers! (still waiting for Avatar Season Three: shirtless zuko style! though XD)

Nice work on this, keep at it!

Poop machine... MAN! TOPH IS FUNNY!

Aw, this was so cute. I loved how Zuko was completely panicked about the baby. xD And Toph thinking up nicknames for it.

I noticed a lot of typos throughout, though. I can't remember where most of them were, but I know in the first line you had "out relationship" instead of "our relationship". Just thought I'd point it out. ^.^;;

CUTE! Loved it, Toph and Aang were so adorable and i can TOTALLY see Zuko freaking out b/c of a baby. That's adorable, love it!

I... love... Toph. Very much.

Very cute, i love this. its a good way to do a friendship one and i agree with you completely about why there shouldn't have been Kataang