This is an amazing piece of writing, nice job :)

please update!

I really like this story, and would be glad if you are ever inspired to update! *hint**hint* Please update!

-Dyslexic Nerd

although i understand, i must admit im sad to see such a magnificent story end. (after i post this i will be checking your page to check on any other stories you have) you are a fantastic writer and im glad you decided to only post completed stories as many authors start stories and then lose interest so the readers never get to read the rest of a story that has interested them so much. i therefore respect you greatly for your desicion. thank you for explaining why and not simply saying you would not be continuing the story. i dont subscribe to a lot of author alerts but you are definitly one with which i will be doing so. i wish you good luck and no writers block in your future writings. thanks for the awesome story, good luck!

i love this story! it's so sweet! i especially love the ending! definitely a favourite! this is the first family themed story i've read!

This was great! I loved how Lucy and Edmund looked aftrer each other and took care of each other! FANTABULOUS job! :D

NO! You can't stop this story permanemtly.:O

It is amazing and you just have to keep writing it :(

Bummer, hate to see this story stop, i've read it like twice or three times. Your a very good author and i can't wait to see your writing in the future.

Aw darn, I liked this story. Oh well :)

Cora

i'm sad to see the story end, but i understand it's what you have to do. i enjoyed it a lot and hope that i will see it redone sometime in the future. i'm keen on reading your new style of writing and am looking forward to future stories!

*cries* Sad to see you possible ending this story, but one must do what they must do sometimes, so I fully understand and hope you can finish or redo this story sometime in the future.

update danf tv love the story

great chapter! i laughed out loud when lucy and edmund woke peter up and when peter dragged edmund down the hall. i needed that. i am glad that their father is coming home, but probably not as happy as them. looking forward to the next chapter! )

That was good.

Oh nice job on the chapter hehe, and ya mean people have been tormenting you? lol well guess some just not as patient as others. But really this story is good so can understand that.