Whoa that was pretty good totally good to me this should not be a oneshot!

The story is nice, I'll never get tired of Claymore yuri but IMO a relationship like this should have more time to be developed to add more credibility.

also, don't let the troll put you down, he goes from place to place trolling everything because he wrote a crappy story, got a bad review and he is taking it on everyone else.

This is a very well done yuri story, I haven't seen a yuri fic for Claymore that is this touching for a long time now. I want more! Keep writing! :D