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Reviews for: Untitled 3: The saga continues Reworked
bob0045
2009-09-05 . chapter 6
I hope that you keep going with this, it's really good. I have enjoyed the whole saga so far.

Poor Mason, he was being so considerate. They say that nice guys, finish last. Seems this even applies to the drunken British ones.
rumoredreader
2009-06-24 . chapter 4
Very interesting, hope to read more soon!
Veritas Found
2009-03-31 . chapter 3
I love the deaths - way to go, keeping the quirky side the EID has to deal with (near-decapitation via stop sign? AWESOME). Love the plot-building, too; I felt so bad for Mason, walking in on that kiss like that. All in all, loved the update.
Veritas Found
2009-03-24 . chapter 2
I liked your initial third installment, but from the two chaps you've got up so far I think I'm gonna really like wherever you take this one, too. Love how you explained the time skip more here, and the added backstory to Scott. Also love Mason's comment on the solitaire. xD

Also, really love how you changed the Mason avoidance to a mutual avoidance of the topic variety (instead of general avoidance all together); seems a bit more in-character for them, though Mason just bailing's a bit in-character, too, so I guess either would work. xD
pinkminx
2009-03-16 . chapter 1
i am still bordering on having scott date george although not the same way- he's a bit meeker and to put it lightly a pussy- the story arc may have george and scott on a pity date... dunno yet but will def resolve the G/M relationship
LobsangLudd
2009-03-16 . chapter 2
I like both but i prefer this version a little because her dating scott made me sad :(
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