I was just reading Twilight and was pretty positive that Edward has bronze hair...

No matter, its a fanfiction do what you want :)

Great story, just couldn't get past the relationship with Quil. He has never been my favorite wolf.

You have a pretty good story going but make sure you keep up with your own facts. Are there like 2 wolfs named Brady? cause in chapter 11 Brady amd Seth were guarding the Cullen house, and you specifically said that Brady died. Now he's back and crashed into Madison on a surf board. Zombie? pay a little more attention to things that have already happened.

You might want to change the 17 to a 16 for the reason Madi's ex just went to juvie. Once you turn 17 years old, you are legally an adult in the eyes of the judicial system, and can be tried as such

Hey!

So I know it's been forever since you updated this and I've been waiting until the break to read it so I'm soooo glad I did. I loved how you didn't tell us who Madison had chosen until very near the end. You were really confusing me, but I was pretty sure on who it was.

This story was great and I'm sad that your not going to write anymore twilight ffn, but I will definitely always love this story. I'm a fan of glee so I'll check out some of your one shots. Much love xoxo TBG

I don't like how she ended with Quil. You should've kept the story plot continuing with Jasper. Kinda went downhill after. But I your whole story until those parts.

Baby I am soo proud of you that you finished this story! I loved it from the very beginning and though I am sad to see it go, I am beyond thrilled that Mads got her happy ending and her baby! I was totally tearing up there at the end. I never thought that I would be going for Quil, but this was just perfect. They truly are the best for each other. The amount of love..gah, just love it!

I have loved every moment of this story!

I'm all for getting into your Glee things you've written, they're great!

I love you and you are an amazing author, regardless of what it is that you're writing!

Great story.

LOVE it.

Longer review later.

I NEED THAT LAST CHAPTER! oh, lord, i need it! this is such a good fanfic, and i can't wait to see what happens! :D

OMG!

I can't believe this! I can't believe you'd do this to us. That's not cool. I mean GOD Jazz, what are you doing to Mads? Like shit I think that was very selfish of him to do that. I mean shes already been through so much and she's finally happy. I don't like this...How come Alice didn't try to stop this? Dang now I'm worried as to what's going to happen. I was worried that that was the reason that Jazz was going to talk to her. SHIT SHIT SHIT!

But I did enjoy the Quil Mads moments, they are so cute together. I'm falling in love with them and then you do this. Gosh...But I super loved the lemon, it was HOT LIKE FIRE! Anyway, now I'm super excited for the next chapter. SOrry it took so long to reply exams have been killing me. Anyway update as soon as possible. XOXOX TBG

aw i love how she woke him up. that was a cute moment. i love where she made him soup and she talked about the future and she got all flustered. that was so cute.

i like quil's explanation if why he didnt tell mads sooner. hes really wise for his age and it was good he didnt tell her before hand. i mean, im sure she could have guessed but he told her at the right time. things ended up working out and molding together well.

the scene where he "proposes" was so sweet. i would say yes too!

omg! i cannot believe this! i guess it was nice of jasper to leave s mads could have a chance with quil but that doesnt excuse his behavior. she seems so happy with quil and they have such a deep bond. i really hope she chooses quil! way to leave us with a cliffhanger! i cannot wait for the next chapt but im sad its coming to an end.

Great Chapter! I really liked what you did. It did make me sad when Quil and Madison were fighting and the fact that he got with Lauren... gosh I've never liked her character and I don't know even more lol. But I understand what both of them were going through so it must not have been fun. I am glad that Madison got to feel a tiny bit of what Quil has been feeling the past two years. I felt that was deserved.

I loved that finally everything is out in the open and they are going to go on a date. Over these years they totally deserve it! I can't wait for the next chapter to read about it. Oh and a question, what's going on with Madison's transformations? Do those still happen? Anyway great stuff. XOXO TBG

I really enjoyed this chapter. It definitel made me cry. I'm so happy they finally got together. They both deserve to be happy. I just hope Jasper doesn't mess it up by coming back and trying to get back with her. He's hard to resist. I loved the song you used. After my weekend, i could definitely relate to it. Could you tell me the name of the song and who sings it? I would really appreciate it. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Baby, I'm so sorry it took me soo long to read this chapter. I'm such a slacker bestest! But it was absolutely amazing! I was hooked the entire time! I love the song Hungover and I thought it fit really good with the entire chapter.

The party was both a disaster and a blessing in disguise I think! I'm glad that Jack didn't get all moody when it was clear that they were better off just being friends. I'll miss him though!

I love the little bonding moment between Seth and Mads. Guess if he was going to drink for the first time, it would be with his step sister..that's be the safest best! lol.

I felt so bad for her and I was right there with her when he realized she has always loved Quil. It's funny, she's his imprint and all this time she felt this draw to him! It all makes sense now!

I thought you did a great job with their conversation. Glad they didn't just jump into things with each other! Yes they love each other, but she's still a little broken. Which, I think Quil will be able to make it all better! *giggles*

I lovee Quil, he owns! I mean yes I'm a Jasper girl, but you can't fight fate now can you?

Sweet little kiss, I want more baby! mm

This chapter was love all around! And I will patiently (somewhat) wait for the next! I'll be so sad when it ends!

Love you baby! *kisses*

WOAH! That was so cool! i can't believe she said bitch when asking who he imprinted on. I love how he told her! :P