lol

The red shirts do have a habit of dying, don't they? Very fun!

Hilarious. If only Harry was that clued up.

hahahah, oh my gosh! that was so funny!

lol. i love how delusional harry sounds. snape deserves him so much. lol. but you're right about the rules of storytelling. you just don't do that.

last line just made me laugh

Bwahahahahaha! Star trek refrence! Hee hee hee hee bril very funny

Falls on floor, laughing. (although if his family had a telly at all, Snape should be quite familiar with Star Trek, even if he could only watch it at the Evans household. I wasn't aware that _anyone_ could escape that show in Britain or out of it). Even if Snape rejected everything Muggle, the parallels between him and Any Given Redshirt would naturally strike him. Jay Leno said it best, "On the away team, there's Kirk, Spock, McCoy, and Ensign Leibowitz. Who's not coming back?"

Sometimes in between, it started seeming like as if it was Snape wishing that things could be like this. Maybe Snape did wish that Harry loved him?;)

LMFAO that was great! At first I was like wtf is going on and then I got where you were going with it all and couldn't help but burst out laughing. Good thing I'm alone!

Did I ever tell you that you have incredibly sexy eyes? They make me think of dark tunnels.

Love the ending! I don't think I've laughed so hard in ages! You are a God at crack. Love you!

lol. Nice satire. I love it. :)

Absolutely brilliant! You're a genius. It's so funny and ridicules I just can't stop laughing.

that was cute! ;p

cute i like how u put the star trek thing in there of how all the guys with the red shrits die iam not sure hoe tunnels are sexy hay cute ending poor snape if harry was like that to me i would punch him at least he would be quite he reminds me of my lill bro in this story