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jason864 sg-1
2009-12-13 . chapter 1
DONT STOP! U should have earth with more ships and reaserching planatary defences and new ships it would be awsome
ladybug48
2009-12-03 . chapter 6
Please continue with this awesome story! I can't wait to see what happens next!
RJLCyberPunk
2009-12-01 . chapter 3
What is the secret they fear? SGverse hyperdrive? Ascension? All of the above?
RJLCyberPunk
2009-12-01 . chapter 2
When it comes to Stargates one needs a really serious blast in the multigigaton range to take them out. Such as the MK9 gate buster bomb. And given the fact that most settlements are built near the gates would mean wiping out the whole planet population they intent to conquer in one stroke. I think Thrawn would be inerested in learning what exactly kind of devices are those and how he could use them himself to his advantage. Once he does all he has to do to prevent the natives from escaping would be to dial the intended target's gate so they cannot dial out and flee from the invasion. That's how the Goa'uld empire did it and it worked for them brilliantly until the Tau'ri showed up that is. :D
RJLCyberPunk
2009-11-29 . chapter 5
OK First of I like the idea of an invasion of the SG universe by the SW universe.Especilly having tried one myself having said that keep in mind that SG hyperspace and SW hyperspace are pretty different. You have not specified which hyperdrive the imperials are suing but given the fact that they have only conquered very primitive worlds leads me to believe they are still using their own which has severe restrictions around gravitational fields unlike SGverse hyperdrive. Other than that keep up the good work.
Blacksword Zero
2009-11-23 . chapter 6
I can't wait to read the next chapter.
jason864 sg-1
2009-11-11 . chapter 6
WOW great story

Continual invasion is not Grand Admiral Thraws style though he sets up on a base defends it then scouts for important bases

Also u should make the chapters could be a little longer like the battle shots they should be a little more descriptive with like "After the 302s came out of the hangers they spead twards the TIEs and launches there missles. As the first misle hit home the Ties quicky split up and charged the 302s with a lazer impacting the f302 blasting off its wing but the TIE taking a burst of rail gun fire in return" it just an example and im not that good at it so dont take it personally i know i cant do as well as u just like big guns and lots of space battles

Other then that the story has absolutly no problems with this story its completly awsome keep it up its really good and really peaks my intrest

U should give Earth a few more ships though like Make a 305 for them (I can make up specs for them if u like i love doing that) to use as a flagship and like 5 more 304s cause the inperial remnent would still have a lot left. in the last command there were at least 200 standerd star destroyers and over 30 support ships so earth needs a lot more ships and a few better ones (Like make the 3rd and 4th gen earth ships like Promethus was first gen Daedelus 2nd and i can help with 3rd and 4th)

Thank u for writing this and if u need any help msg me and i will try to help im just a big fan of SG so its good to see it mabe have some BSG in here that would be cool to have earth give Galatica and Pegasus shields and stuff
texaswookie
2009-11-09 . chapter 6
just found this think its cool can't wait to see more. I can't help but wonder if you know the correct fighter slang for the various types of ties.
bladerunner89
2009-09-17 . chapter 6
Rather interesting story so far but you seem to have forgoten the Ancient's chair down in antarctica unless it got destroyed in an episode I missed. But it is non the less inreresting
XXXXXXX
2009-09-11 . chapter 4
Outbound Flight failed because it was attacked by Thrawn (very long story).
Yarick
2009-08-15 . chapter 1
I must say, your fans suck..


Lern2Spil nubs.
Yarick
2009-08-15 . chapter 6
hey michael, what's up?

Love the story
LucasArts
2009-08-15 . chapter 1
Please.. just stop writing this story.. .

Everyone that says it's good is being sarcastic so you can just keep writing..


Also... grammar is horrible, please fix..

Also...storyline.. is horrible.. please fix


Also... LULZY LULZY LULZY!




































. but seriously fix that shit or everyone will continue to be sarcastic.
Spidey2
2009-08-06 . chapter 6
loved it! keep going!
ILIKE FANFICTION
2009-07-23 . chapter 1
Keep on going this is a very good story. And the previous 2 reviews are ppl just being rude. Again please do not abondon this story you rarilly seen any more
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