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Nytd
2009-03-07 . chapter 1
Oh, and things still haven't changed, have they?

I love the thought of the cold silence in the morgue suddenly being broken by noise coming from *inside* one of the drawers.

I can so vividly see Barbossa kicking it open and staggering to his feet, pale shivering and beat to a pulp, but rapidly on the mend.

Poor guy, having to make due with naught but a sheet from the morgue as he heads off to likely carve out a new niche and a new identity for himself.

I'd love to see this be expanded or become a series!

More post FOY fun from you is always a joy!

Cheers!
Nytd
catgirlutah
2009-03-06 . chapter 1
Ha. I loved how Barbossa got up off the table after the autopsy. Though, my favorite part is when Jack marks it as a win in his notes. That seems like something he would most certainly do. I'd love to see a collection of one-shots of Jack and Barbossa's eternal 'relationship'. That would be pretty awesome.
Once again, you've astounded me with how awesome you are. Keep it up!
Jennifer Lynn Weston
2009-03-05 . chapter 1
Still competing! It just figures.
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