Aww, sweet!

Good story.

That's a cute Toko oneshot there. Well written -- great job on imagery, word choice, sentence structure, and character interaction.

Ah, that's so adorable!

This is very, very cute. Great job! JYeah, Toko is the best, remember it and write it ;)
Thank you for writing,

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Good one.

really sweet and nicely done.
two thumbs up.

Cool. Glad to see some more of your work. Excellent as always, keep at it.

Cute ^^ Zuko's a dope... Hehe

Nice and hopeful little bit of storytelling. Very well done.

Aw that was funny when she snapped and unintentionally rejected him...lol... I loved it you kept them in character very well... hope you write more Toph/Zuko in the future cause there's a shortage on this pairing... either way it was great

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