I've seen this around for a while, and today I decided to go for it. And Oh. My. Hell. I'm so glad I did. This is easily in my top 10 fics of all time. Freaking genious.

I love how Bella takes care of him, helps him, even cleans for him.

Very good, Very raw, and very... just... feeling!

Fucking rolicking around laughing right now!

Funniest. Chapter. Ever.

Aside from Bella's bodily assualt of course (not exactly funny, but still giggle-worthy).

Srsly, brills. Beeyootiful even.

I am enamored!

Okay, shit. I just tuned in to this chapter and I'm already compelled to say:

"While I was moving into my wonderful fantasy world where Bella was currently giving me a sinful view of all her glorious womanly bits and doing a rather provocative dance while using the desk as a damn lucky prop, Emmett decided to ruin any chance at figuring out if she indeed could drop it like it was hot. I groaned and rubbed my face because this was getting out of hand."

Amen sister!

And bloody hell, you've got the goods (all right, badass boxing Edward does, but still...).

WOW, I just read all 6 chapters and I am in love with this story! This last chapter was so hot and I love that you can feel all of the emotions these two are going through and I love that they are not perfect and there are issues, but mostly I love hot fightward and his possessive/protectiveness. He is my new favorite and I want to put him in a jar and keep him for my own enjoyment. Thanks for the incredible story and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Found you story on Twilighted and so glad I did. Extremely well thought out and written! Loved every chapter so far. Chock full of good details and nice long chapters. Your story is so different and original and I love your E/B characters.

found your story recommended on twilighted and had to come check it out. I already love the plot line and I like the little bit of edward we have seen. Your writting is very good and I can't wait to read the rest you have written!

Wow, I really like this story. Please update soon.

OMG love, love, loved it! I was so glad that you included Edward's POV for the part where bELLA gets knocked down.

Hey Hun still going strong and keeping us on the edge of our seats with want and need for more

xoxoxo

Mae xloves Cenax

Holy f*ck. That was so hot and there is no doubt in my mind that I will be heading outside for a cigarette after I post this. Amazing. Simply amazing.

Wow. Glad we got Edward's perspective on what happened. He definitely sees red when it comes to Bella getting hurt. The loving was beautiful. He definitely showed her how he felt even if he couldn't come out and tell her in so many words. And I'm glad she seems to understand that. GAH, it was so delicious.

Aw, I love that Edward found her in her truck and made her live with him. And I'm glad they didn't fight too much about it. I can understand her pride in not telling him and I can understand him being upset about her putting herself in danger. The KO she took made her amusing, and it's sweet seeing Edward taking care of her this time around. Is there a reason we didn't find out who it was? Was it someone trying to f*ck with Edward before his fight with James? Take out his girl so it screws with his head?

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wow...

i cant say anything right now coz im kinda spacin out on edward so...

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Another great one. Good to see a bit of background with Edward and the guys. I don't like the fight with James either. I'd bet he definitely has something up his sleeve and it's not gonna be good. I just have this bad feeling Bella's gonna end up involved somehow. Yikes.

WOW *fans self while taking a cold shower* that lemon was HOT! I found this chapter really well written, and the plot just seemed to flow nicely. I think that you made the right decision to not have Fightward tell Bella that he loves her just yet, as it fits more with how his character has been portrayed so far! I, for one, am looking forward to seeing how the relationship further develops between Edward and Bella, and I can't wait for the big scary fight with James! :)