Menamebephil is right--so utterly sweet. Mengsk is right--nice touch with Ron’s supporters mangling his name. CajunBear73 is right--this story has HUGE spinoff potential.
and you're right. it is a perfect jewel, in its synthesis of the canon plot elements anc its characterizations. Du's done--go Kim.

Super story! Well written, loved the ties with existing KP Universe. B+/A-

Lol, wow that was just awesome. This story was very well written, I liked how you kept things the same (i.e. the Diablo incident) while keeping Ron locked up. But what I loved the most about this story was the humor. Man, this is one of the funniest things I've read in awhile. And that was why Kim Possible was a good show, which you captured here perfectly.

I have no complaints on this story. (Not saying it was perfect, cause I'm not sure about that lol. But it was much better than I could do so I can't say anything bad about it lol)

A beautifully done story. Very impressive original idea mixed with the show, especially impressive handling of season 4. Ending was wonderful.

You did a truley exellent work with this fic, do you know why?
Simple, because in about 99.9% of all stories where Ron has gone evil or turned back after being evil he ALWAYS is turned into some sappy angst boy, you on the other hand made sure he kept his wonderful Roness, and for that i salute you.

Excellent.

MK2

So cool! I liked it a lot- especially the part where Ron snuck out to make the cake, even if the ankle band had an off button that was impressive.

Enjoyable AU of this little 'verse. Slow and steady each drew closer to the other as Ron's sentence went on.

Kim somehow made it through her missions and school without her Ron by her side, but found that he was in her heart throughout it all.

Now that there is this new level to explore with each other, it will be a bit sad that Ron is tethered to his cell for a bit longer as Kim can move about freely. But her plans are being made to be nearby for some time to come.

It would be a challenge for you, or someone else as you are working on a tangent from someone else's tale, to work around a romance with those two while Ron is serving his sentence.

But that's for another time.

Good tale and looking forward for more from ya.

CajunBear73

Neat little plot. I do think it was better to take the Bad Boy option. Nice touch with the news broadcast at the start, especially with the person calling for 'Don's' release.

Actually I'm surprised anyone in the world his even aware of his previous heroic acts.
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I was under the impression this would be ZORPOX in prision, not Ron Stoppable. In some ways the two are completely different characters. I mean, Zorpox does what Zorpox wants. Good luck trying to keep him in his cell if that's NOT where he wants to be. I thought this story would be about Kim tip-toeing around him to convince him it was where he wanted to be.

This is not that story, though no less for it. Brings very different thoughts to mind. First: Ouch Ron, ouch! 25 years like this? You're better off on the run. Good thing that boy is resiliant.
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A one-shot huh? I must admit I wouldn't mind hearing more of Ron's prison adventures. Alas without interraction with the other villains you have limited yourself. It would be intriging to watch Ron have to toughen up to survive in general population, not to mention Kim's reaction if he developed a slightly harder world view.

Two for three, please. Or four, depending on your definition of "teammate".

Barkin is truly amazing. I'm sorry, but I have to say that. I actually had a history teacher that was a bit like him. One of the notable differences, though, was that my teacher would randomly burst into song. And looked like Albert Einstein with a very severe haircut.

Minor note, but your use of the word "eventually" worried me slightly. You know where I mean.

The world of KP is PLAGUED by the dreaded 'off button'.

And hooray for Will Du. He's such a professional.

In summaray: not quite diabetes-inducing, but a damn sight closer than anything else I've read from you. This is not necessarily a bad thing.

I'd write more, but "Ra Ra Rasputin" has INVADED MY BRAIN. Eight tracks in, and so far David Bowie has been ineffectual in driving that damn song out.

MNBP