Oh! Fascinating.

By the way, I appreciate your lack of descent into Petrellicest.

I always wondered what happened! I enjoyed this alot- I can really see it happening. Very nifty!

... Damn. 0_0
I need to start watching the show again...

Loved it, wish you continued, like in you own version.

I love it! Totally makes sense. But I do have one small thing to point out- Peter wasn't shot with a bullet, he was shot with a taser dart. Much less serious problem, but I seem to have been the only one who noticed this. I even rewound the recording I made of the episode and watched it (zoomed in) a couple of times to be sure, and Danko definitely hit him with one of those high-tech taser thingies.

Anyway, awesome little oneshot. I'll try to read more of your stuff in between writing chapters of my novel. Although, god knows how long that'll take... This thing is killing me, it really is. Blood, sweat, tears, and a whole lot of soul...

Wow! Thank you for writing this! This is wonderfully well characterized. I particularly love your Nathan's sour take on Peter's acts of defiant self-martyrdom. Great job!

This is my favorite story! From the second I saw that scene I prayed that someone would write about it, or about what happened, and not just anyone; someone with talent! You always seem to be the answer to my Petrelli prayers(cool alliteration). This is absolutely brilliant. Everyone is completely, and perfectly, in character. I'm reading this, going: "Yes! Peter would definatly ignore Nathan throughout this whole ordeal!" And I loved Nathan's 'My Darling Clementine' story.

'Oh yes, Nathan thought sourly. Peter had always been good at this kind of thing. ‘Just look at me, poor little me, but look how brave I am, I’m not complaining.’ It was the story of their lives. Annoyed, he said, “It was just a scratch; he’ll be fine.”' Yup. That's Peter.


I love it. Keep writing please.
And I'm sorry I didn't review this when I first read it. I'll try to be better about doing that, I promise.

There really should have been a scene like this! Very good writing, I liked how your own dialogue fitted with the dialogue that was acutally shown.

I love your stories. I never asked me the question what had happen between the shooting and the talk between Nathan, Peter and Angela. But I love your thoughts on it. Very true to character and something I can imaging really happen in the series. Great job!

In reply to Celia, who didn't deign to sign her comment:
leant is a word, it's British English, and it's perfectly correct.

Feel free to point out *actual* errors. I'm not a native speaker, so there may be some, especially in usage. I learnt British English at school and in England, and even though I'm covering an American setting here, I'm sticking to the British spelling (and usage except in direct speech) that I'm used to, in order to avoid inconsistencies.

And yes, learnt is a word too...

leant - isn't a word. It should be leaned. Good story, but please fix the typos.

Thx,

Awesome! =)

This story is so great! Really well written and in character... and you know I can't believe you're the only one who wrote something like this - after the episode I was kind of expecting tons of stories about Nathan helping Peter... anyway, great work! =)

this is a nice piece of work! you write the characters very well.

awesome story! i wish they had shown this scene on the show