 WhenLighteningStrikes 2009-03-11 . chapter 1Aww...that was so cute. The summary itself was very interesting, so it just keeps you hooked on through, because there are some things that you *have* to read. I loved the LwD references, like the fact that the demise to "The Prince" was inevitable. Sometimes we forget to add these things in the middle, but they make it all the more realistic.
And Casey slipping in her question in between was *So* funny!
And the ending was just really sweet without being all sunshine and dasies.
You once reviewed one of my stories and said "Its better than anything I could come up with."
Guess what.
You were wrong.
:) |
 bsloths 2009-03-10 . chapter 1ooh, this was awesome! I think you portrayed not-quite-drunk Derek really well! Oddly enough, I'm working on a College!Dasey fic that has very big similarities to this - I guess great minds think alike! hehe!
Anyway, this was really cute. I love how you made him want the two wishes, and the one he got was the one that really mattered. Very, very cute. |
 81108DaSeY 2009-03-09 . chapter 1This was perfect. Even if you don't know much about alchohal it sounded like you did. You made this one-shot very believable and I am glad that you wrote this for all of us to read! Great job! |
 TheBucketWoman 2009-03-08 . chapter 1There was a lot to like in this. I loved that George, having found out that the Prince was totaled freaks out with no concern for anything else. I can just see Derek snarking "Don't worry Dad, no one got *hurt* or anything."
It's a shame that Derek had to get a little drunk before making his move, but what the heck. It's better than no move at all, right? |
 bbymojo 2009-03-08 . chapter 1the ending was perfect..but i can't help but wonder what tomorrow would actually bring..hehe.. ΓΌ |
 daisy617 2009-03-07 . chapter 1Aww that was so cute! Great job. The ending was perfect, don't worry. I loved it all. |
 singer154 2009-03-07 . chapter 1OH MY GOD!
I loved this fic. it was, well, amazing. supersweet and awesome. as for the whole alcohol thing, not much experience on this front, either. But it sounded good 2 me. At least from what my friends have said.
GREAT FIC!
XOXO
Annie |
 Frogster 2009-03-07 . chapter 1Good job! I liked the back story and all the rewarding info that went with it. Also loved you referring to Truman as Trollman. I finally saw No Secrets yesterday and man, was he annoying.
I hope you write something else (or update CCoC) really soon! :D |
 Chica De Los Ojos Cafe 2009-03-07 . chapter 1Oh this was sweet. I loved it.
~Chica~ |
 MissDaretoDair 2009-03-07 . chapter 1Omigawd Symone!
Thank you so very much!
I loved the one-shot. It was very creative and you even chose one of my fav songs to put in it.
Again thank you!
-big hug-
Love.
Ashley |
 mimibear 2009-03-07 . chapter 1nice...i love the ending...cute cute cute... write more... |
 Super Reader 2009-03-07 . chapter 1That was great! You always write the most unique Life with Derek oneshots. :D I feel bad that I haven't been writing at all but my computer is sick and without Word so I don't feel encouraged to write anything. :(
Did you ever see the rest of the LwD season 4? Since it hasn't been posted on youtube, I haven't so I don't know if it's good. Is it? |
 Leaf26 2009-03-07 . chapter 1Nice story and you did a wonderful job on it. Keep up the good work! |
 wprincessannw 2009-03-07 . chapter 1I think its kind of sweet :)
liked their friends relationship too!! |
 itsi3 2009-03-06 . chapter 1Great job!! very in-character!
Congrats on not drinkin! I've only had a virgin strawberry daquiri,a wine cooler, a sip of rum and coke... and that's over the past 3yrs.
Loved it! Especially the way you ended it! Very sweet!
~Crystal |