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WhenLighteningStrikes
2009-03-11 . chapter 1
Aww...that was so cute. The summary itself was very interesting, so it just keeps you hooked on through, because there are some things that you *have* to read. I loved the LwD references, like the fact that the demise to "The Prince" was inevitable. Sometimes we forget to add these things in the middle, but they make it all the more realistic.
And Casey slipping in her question in between was *So* funny!

And the ending was just really sweet without being all sunshine and dasies.

You once reviewed one of my stories and said "Its better than anything I could come up with."

Guess what.


You were wrong.

:)
bsloths
2009-03-10 . chapter 1
ooh, this was awesome! I think you portrayed not-quite-drunk Derek really well! Oddly enough, I'm working on a College!Dasey fic that has very big similarities to this - I guess great minds think alike! hehe!

Anyway, this was really cute. I love how you made him want the two wishes, and the one he got was the one that really mattered. Very, very cute.
81108DaSeY
2009-03-09 . chapter 1
This was perfect. Even if you don't know much about alchohal it sounded like you did. You made this one-shot very believable and I am glad that you wrote this for all of us to read! Great job!
TheBucketWoman
2009-03-08 . chapter 1
There was a lot to like in this. I loved that George, having found out that the Prince was totaled freaks out with no concern for anything else. I can just see Derek snarking "Don't worry Dad, no one got *hurt* or anything."

It's a shame that Derek had to get a little drunk before making his move, but what the heck. It's better than no move at all, right?
bbymojo
2009-03-08 . chapter 1
the ending was perfect..but i can't help but wonder what tomorrow would actually bring..hehe.. ΓΌ
daisy617
2009-03-07 . chapter 1
Aww that was so cute! Great job. The ending was perfect, don't worry. I loved it all.
singer154
2009-03-07 . chapter 1
OH MY GOD!
I loved this fic. it was, well, amazing. supersweet and awesome. as for the whole alcohol thing, not much experience on this front, either. But it sounded good 2 me. At least from what my friends have said.
GREAT FIC!
XOXO
Annie
Frogster
2009-03-07 . chapter 1
Good job! I liked the back story and all the rewarding info that went with it. Also loved you referring to Truman as Trollman. I finally saw No Secrets yesterday and man, was he annoying.

I hope you write something else (or update CCoC) really soon! :D
Chica De Los Ojos Cafe
2009-03-07 . chapter 1
Oh this was sweet. I loved it.

~Chica~
MissDaretoDair
2009-03-07 . chapter 1
Omigawd Symone!

Thank you so very much!

I loved the one-shot. It was very creative and you even chose one of my fav songs to put in it.

Again thank you!

-big hug-

Love.
Ashley
mimibear
2009-03-07 . chapter 1
nice...i love the ending...cute cute cute... write more...
Super Reader
2009-03-07 . chapter 1
That was great! You always write the most unique Life with Derek oneshots. :D I feel bad that I haven't been writing at all but my computer is sick and without Word so I don't feel encouraged to write anything. :(

Did you ever see the rest of the LwD season 4? Since it hasn't been posted on youtube, I haven't so I don't know if it's good. Is it?
Leaf26
2009-03-07 . chapter 1
Nice story and you did a wonderful job on it. Keep up the good work!
wprincessannw
2009-03-07 . chapter 1
I think its kind of sweet :)

liked their friends relationship too!!
itsi3
2009-03-06 . chapter 1
Great job!! very in-character!
Congrats on not drinkin! I've only had a virgin strawberry daquiri,a wine cooler, a sip of rum and coke... and that's over the past 3yrs.
Loved it! Especially the way you ended it! Very sweet!
~Crystal
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