Good story! I like your language and how you focused on the Bookman's memory.

I was listening to "So Cold" by Breaking Benjamin while reading this and it seemed to fit PERFECTLY.

that was a little sad. i always thought it sad, tragic even, that eventually lavi and bookmen will leave an become other people, that they have no true friends.

Kind of sad but great fic ^^ Where do you get this stuff? Keep it up ^^

Ahh... this is really deep and thoughtful... I liked it. ^^ Thank you for posting this mind-inducing fic up! I really enjoyed the whole idea of being left behind, and leaving everything behind... Amazing~~

you haven't failed. i really like it.
but is so sad!!
sometimes i think that is better if the Earl won't be defeat, because after this all the characters don't have anymore the main reason that make them stay together.
ok, now i'm becoming melancholy...so is better if i stop writing.
bye,bye.

PS: YEAH, D.GRAY-MAN IS BACK! FINALLY! XD