Hii
I really enjoyed your story, even though it was so tragically cut short.
I actually understand though. The same thing used to happen to me all the time, thats why i haven't updated my first story 'The Vampire Within' in months. I feel terrible about it, but when you loose so much of your work it really puts you off the story, sometimes indefinitely. I am planning to go back to it some time, hopefully soon. I am really sad that your not going to be writing more of yours.
I have only read the first few of the Sweep books, but i really like them and just got in to the series' fan fictions too.
I was wondering if you would mind terribly if I used your story. I don't mean to be rude and if you don't like my idea then i don't mind you rejecting it, but i do hate to see this idea cut short. I would like to make an offer to you. I would like to rewrite your story and post it up if you agree, but i would also include that this was your story idea to give you the credit you deserve and maybe we could bounce ideas back and forth too. If not then i will just write my own story for the series, I already have plenty of thoughts for them. I just really liked this one so far and have some ideas for it thats all.
Please get back to me as soon as you can. Already dying to know if your annoyed at me for even suggesting i continue your story. ^__^
Thanks
...Anie

omg i love your story so much!
plz update soon!

I think you should proof read your stories a little better and review your books. Cal's hair is black! The plot of your story isn't bad, but it would be a better read if you would pick a person to right in.. I mean is it first person or third? And if you don't know what I'm talking about, you shouldn't be writing...

There are a few things that I would like to say (or write, whatever). First: this is a very good story, I like it. Keep writing. Second: I would like to read a Cal pov, so that we all can know him better. And third: I noticed a mistake. You said that the hair of Cal was blond, but actually, it's black. I've read the books over again today and there they said that he had black hair. Sorry, but I just noticed that mistake. That's a proof that I'm really concentrating on reading your story, so you should feel proud :) Anyway, like I said earlier: keep going!

I think Hunter should be angry first then slowly accepts it because he will do anything to make Morgan happy. And yes, please add Cal's POV!

Er...It's okay. Except I don't think Hunter would ever let her go like that. He'd probably stay whether she wanted him to or not. Lol. Good plot, though.

O.O Update soon!

this is such crap, update soon! lolz, i love it. xD

Luv it! Good plot. I can't wait for the next chapter!

ya. this IS predictable, but i want you to keep writing more because i wanna see hunter's reaction when he finds out about cal :D