People like you should read "Super Crack Bros: Pairings" and you might learn a few things.

I don't know why, but your story seems to be the target for flamers. =< What a bunch of morons, they never learn.

Anyways, I really liked the flying scene, and Pit showing off. Did I tell you how much I liked your characterization of Pit? Well yeah, I do.

Their relationship is getting somewhere, hooray. ^_^ Oh um, though maybe you want to change the summary, because I'm pretty sure the whole story isn't based on the first chapter.

I hate gay pairings and pairings involving characters the writer knows nothing about. Why are there so many of them?

No problem, Oceaus! Aw, this chapter was so sweet, and the images of the ocean were pretty. Ooh, the next chapter of Reunion has a flying scene too, how interesting...and I loved the details, like Ike and Link's swords in the sand.

I also liked how Pit's personality seemed to change some after flying. That was really sweet.

Just a few really small typos:

[Them were no different from any other muscles.] 'They'?

[He could faintly hear of the other fighters plating soccer on the beach] 'Playing'?

[On the other side of the ‘field,’ Link’s and Meta Knights were embedded there. Red decided to not be part of the game, just sitting down on the sand.] 'Meta Knight's'?

Oh, and the ending made me LOL. Really sweet and beautiful chapter. Please update soon. :)

I wouldn't listen to the people who are saying Pit and Red are not gay, although maybe you're not already. I say, if you like the pairing, go for it. :)

I love how you're setting them up as just friends first. That's how I like this pairing, too. Hm, I wonder how the favor will turn out...I look forward to the next chapter!

My only complaint is that breaking the flow of the writing with comments like "(take that, Lucas x Red fans! I hate that pairing. Lucas is what, 8? 9?)" or "I WILL EAT YOUR WATERMELONS IF YOU MAIN JIGGLYPUFF" is a little distracting. I would put comments like the former in author's notes at the beginning and end of the chapter, and I think the latter is supposed to serve as a line break, but it's a little cleaner to just put the X-X-X-X in instead. Anyway, great job!

RED IS NOT GAY! Why the hell do you fangirls think he is and pair nim up with a bunch of other not gays? Stupid fangirls.

Interesting turn of events, what was the meeting for? (And why was Ike leader of the Fire Emblem "Kingdom" when Marth is the veteran and is more royalty than Ike.)

Um... I'm a little nitpicky about that "Red brushing Lucas off" thing. Sure, I know you don't like that pairing, but that doesn't mean you have to be rude about it. I don't think Red would intentionally push Lucas away if you were trying to keep him in character. And seeing a Pit/Red fan bash Red/Lucas might give us all a bad name, so... I recommend that there be no further bashing of pairings, or Lucas. (As much as I would like to make up for the Red bashing in all those Ness/Lucas fics, I can't because I'm not stooping to their level.) Lucas is 13, or so I remember.

The water fight was cute though. ...Make me think of Icarus, where the boy's wings fell off and drowned. Stupid boy...

I don't know what direction this story is going but you better update!

Bwah! That was so cute, especially Pit encouraging Red at the beginning. You should definitely continue, if you intend to. I'd like to see where this leads...

Wingshipping is a cute name for Pit x Red, also. :D

Wow, I'm glad that this pairing is getting more recognition and fics.

Um, some things about this fic that I would like to note. Maybe things are going a bit too fast? It's kind of confusing what they think of each other right now. It seems like Pit is unintentionally hitting on Red while Red is already crushing on the angel. A little more detail would be nice. If this is a one shot then I suggest you work more on story planning, but if it's going to continue then you better continue!

I'm glad you'd like to incorperate some fighting in the story so it's not just all romance but I feel it might be a little misplaced.

I love your characterization of Pit though. I think it's cocky and kind of snarky, which gives him the bad@$$ image, which is totally cool. >w<

...When... when were there shipping names for Smash Brothers pairings. D8 Well, I guess that's a cute name Wingshipping, even though I don't know where that came from. (Pit's wings? And... Red's... Charizard? ^^;)

PIT. IS. NOT. GAY. Why does everybody seem to think he is?!