You write so beautifully. I absolutely loved this one shot. I love the way you write the love between Meredith and Derek. Lovely.

Yay for bringing Stewart back!

A prompt contest? What a great idea. I'll be sure and look for more of these.

Great oneshot (and it would be great even without Stewart...lol). I love seeing/reading Meredith being strong and learning how to be there for Derek. And realizing maybe she means as much to him as he to her.

Seriously loved it!

to say i was confused at the beginning would be an understatement, but i ended up really liking it.. i love that derek needs time and meredith's being strong, the role reversal is one of my favorite attributes to read.

good job!

Awe. This was cute. I loved it.

Love you. Seriously love.

What a wonderful treat for a lazy Saturday afternoon.

The dream sequence was really creative. That Stewart popped into Meredith's dream was delightful. His mention to her about capture the flag and her being decent for a jail guard ... just perfect.

I liked that Meredith found all the copies of Derek's actual surgeries ... she is spot-on with her thinking about all of this. Someone on another site mentioned wasn't death discussed in neurosurgery 101?

Meredith finally found Derek out on "their" land and she told him she would say "yes" when he was ready.

An aside note ... I wish you had written into the story that she picked up the bear and took it with her when she and Derek returned the trailer.

I love it, and I giggled when I realized that Stewart was in this fic...Stewart made me laugh, he's a big teddybear himself.

its always great to read your stories!
tahnks a million

What a great story! I loved the "au" LST beginning - it was great to have Stewart back if only in a dream.

I've already reviewed this on your LJ, but just had to say again how awesome this is. I'm so glad you decided to put it on here.

I just love this. At first I thought it was a missing scene from Lightening Strikes Twice, because of Stewart, who is a wonderful figment of your imagination, the best non-canon character ever, in my humble opinion. Then it opens up into this, right up to date and right in character.

I love the way you use dialogue from the show, it fits in perfectly.

I've said other stuff on your LJ that I won't repeat here for fear of boring you, but needless to say, once again you have surpassed yourself and amazed me. Wonderful stuff.