Woa. Keep it up!

bloody hell! that was the best bit of writing i have ever read...problem is...u didnt update since 2001...which was when u wrote this story...UPDATE FAST!

This is Uiniu again, and I would like to appologize for a part of my last review, what I ment when I said it wasn't descriptive, I went descriptive of the first battle and the scenery, not the story in general.

The one thing I hear about this story is that it is descriptive. It realy wasn't. Nor was it very acurate. You say that one of the me was most likely in the military, but quit as a soldier. During the human-Covenant war, no one would be allowed to leave the military. One soilder would be too important to waste. In your story you have two battles, yet nothing realy happens. You just say how they end, no fighting. I can't even tell where these people are supposed to be. I don't think you read the books, did you? You should read the books to get a better pespective on the events before you write more. I did.

omg...so well detailed la. So good man, keep it up. And those 2 guys were elites rai? I cant seem to think of anythin else other than hunters but they dun have energy sheilds wor. So gory too.

Just got done reading your story here and thought it was pretty good. Hoped you kinda had some more but I couldn't find any. Well maybe now, you can add-on to this one.

Damn it, That's some of the best narrartion I've read on this site. The ending came to abrupt for my liking but I this fic had me glue to my monitor for the most part. Write more

Meh...what can I say? Descriptive!

Great story! I really hope you continue.

Dude... i hope you have more chapters coming, because im adding this one to my favorites. You are an incredible writer.

that was great. you used the passive voice very effectivly here. you have a great talent

cool not realt that good butt cool more more more...

Yeah, it seemed like you're describing the Flood physically, but with the Covenant's personality. Great story, though.

And, does anyone here know how to get past the Flood guys after you destroy the second core thing? I have the shotgun, so that should help.

hehehehehehe..Very Good! I like your style of writing! It's very unique! Qwrite, more, damnit! Wait...Inspiration! ::runs off to write more::

Truely AMAZING. Extreamly well written. I hope for more to come!