An axe... Doesn't that seem a bit brutal for Faerieland? And I honestly cant picture Sloth in a hotel.

Um... yeah, I really like your story. I can't wait for the next chapter~!

You must finish this. It's a really good story and I hope you finish it.

i lovee this story, keep going with it, it's great.

A few spelling and grammatical errors, otherwise keep going.

love it =]

Hey, this isn't bad at all. I like it.

Hm, but Queen Fyora... was she really that nice to have killed that other Fire Faerie. Personally, I never liked her much on the actual site... She seemed too uppity-up-up, ya know?

But I digress. This is good.

This should be good, but we shall see. Too early in the game to say for sure.

Random. I could see some improvement, though I won't put this on alert. Some more structure in the next chapter would be nice.

omg love!