Love.

This fic is love.

This is so adorable! 3 Oh Sora, you know you can't hide from your guardian.

That was really beautiful. I love how sora grew up as the story progressed.

AMAZING. Riku's and Sora's relationship flowed and grew and changed so well throughout the story, and it was wonderful to read. Aerith was a perfect little addition as well. I wasn't sure if this plotline would sell me but it was completely believable, and that is credit to your writing. You also kept Sora very honest and genuine and sweet, just as he should be. Great job, I really enjoyed it!

awww, that was cute .

good work! :D:D

I read this a while ago, and it has never left my mind. This is completely and utterly beautiful. The portrayal of Riku and Sora's relationship is delicate, sweet, and torturous. I'm usually not this serious, but... this is a truly exquisite piece of art. Well done.

Luly: I know that this is really late but I just read the story and I have to say that I LOVE IT. Yeah! It is awesome, the plot line, the way everything is there and well written, and the images of the story. It is heavenly, awesomely fantstic.

Sofi: Yeah, yeah feed the author's ego...

Luly: Well, you know it is true.

Sofi: Yes indeed. Anyway... We would like to ask permission to draw some fan art for this story-

Luly: Cause we like, um, read that and we went like 'I have to draw the coach scene no matter what'...So... Please? *puppy eyes*

thank you for this wonderful story -

it made me cry poor sora

but now he has an happy end

i hope to see a few updates from you so keep writing

youre very talented

I read this and at the end the only thought on my mind was "aw".

Really cute

very sweet :)

This is so beautiful. Thanks for sharing!

This broke my heart ;_; Adorable, and so cute!

That's...so beautiful! (imagine gai sensei having his mini episodes crying as he watches the sunsets) Extremely love this one-shot! It really is fantastic! It's be fun to read if it had more then one chapter though! XP Keep up the good work though!

Gods it was so good i absolutly loved it, so much in fact that i showed my friends and by the time we got to the end we were all chorusing in "awes" and tearing ur and sniffling. It was so lovley good job :)

:D