 oddsoul 2009-06-25 . chapter 1tourture chamber it is! XD |
 Socially Awkward Turtle 2009-06-12 . chapter 1 Hahah, love the ending..
Liz and Patti were totally screwed :p
Liz- tall, older scaredy cat
Patti- Short, busty insane one
Also, I think it's impossible to know Death The Kid- no, Soul Eater in general- withou realizing Kid has some massive OCD issues for bilateral symmetry.
One or two mistakes here or there. Nice story, overall. :) |
 Sannin-Songo 2009-04-01 . chapter 1I was cracking up the whole time! I alsmost fell out of my chair I was laughing so hard! I feel sorry for Kid and all but dang that was funny. This is just a suggestion but why not post a second chapter with some other poor suker *Cough* Black*Star *Cough* being shoved into it. Still I loved this going onto my favs |
 demon's lil angel 2009-03-22 . chapter 1 you mixed liz and patty by accident, patty is the one who would think the chamber would be fun and liz would be the one to dare kid to go into it, and stop her sister, but you got everyone else's characters perfect! rely good and rely funny, i jest thought i'd point out the twins' switch incase it was an accident caused by you getting ahead in your writing and not noticing that you switch them (don't be mad, almost every twin character that i've made for my oc stories i've switched before and i can't count how many times i've accidently switch hikaru and kaoru's personalities). i rely love your writing style to and how the statue kept going back to an asymmetrical one... poor kid. |
 a 2009-03-18 . chapter 1 lol next chappy plz!! |
 Kelessic 2009-03-12 . chapter 1Very nice story. I enjoyed reading it =)
Loved the ending
I do wish that you would've included Liz and Patty in Kid's adventure though ^_^; |
 Felix the Eeveetrainer 2009-03-07 . chapter 1(laughs)
Epic!
~General Everin Stormclaw of the Emerald Stars and the New Chu Order, Dragon Prince and the Sixth Sutakage, Bearer of the Prophecy and the Moonrider, Commander of the Blood Talons, out. |