 Vypper 2009-07-03 . chapter 1Aw, cute. <3 Very well written and it's so sweet. |
 NoBuddy 2009-04-13 . chapter 1This is really nice and fun to read, but after such a well-balanced beginning, why did you rush it so much towards the end?
Plus at some point it becomes rather confusing, because you haven't separated the different moments of the story. Such as between Seph's discussion with Lazard and then between his tickling session with Genesis and the moment he takes them to show them their new home. You should separate those parts with a line or a pause or whatever you want.
For the rest the story is very nice, I liked it. :) |
 bibochan 2009-03-08 . chapter 1I love it! Another great accomplishment! Funny and still in character! I could honestly imagine Gen and Ang being like that in their own quarters. Ah, personal quirks. |
 Cookiecat 2009-03-07 . chapter 1(And another review... ;)
Oh yes, I definitely think Sephiroth would be bored to death without those two... (I just wondered that he actually admitted it ;)
This was really cute, and - as usual - you really stayed in character and played out all the dynamics (caused by the collision of different personalities ;) very well.
So, even if you write "fluffy crack", it turns out perfect; and even if you are supposed to be on holidays, you actually manage to get something written.
I'm definitely and officially considering to be jealous now (*grin*). |
 Aeriths-Rain 2009-03-07 . chapter 1this is very sweet and well written, very cheerful. i love it! |
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