Oh, I really liked this one! It was cute and had just the right element of humour to it!

"My unlawfully wedded husband" and the last line of course!

That was funny, romantic, and in-character. I LOVED it! ::adds to faves list::

What a wonderful surprise to find your new story today. Your Ray and Florian are a delight, as is this story. I especially like the last last line - how very Ray. I hope you have many more Gorgeous Carat stories to tell - especially now that there's Gorgeous Carat - La Esperanza for inspiration.

What a great story. You always capture their characters so well. Very enjoyable