|Reviews for Checks and Balances|
| Tuli-Susi 6/4/10 . chapter 1
Oh, I really liked this one! It was cute and had just the right element of humour to it!
"My unlawfully wedded husband" and the last line of course!
| MinervaEvenstar 5/20/10 . chapter 1
That was funny, romantic, and in-character. I LOVED it! ::adds to faves list::
| astraplain 3/7/09 . chapter 1
What a wonderful surprise to find your new story today. Your Ray and Florian are a delight, as is this story. I especially like the last last line - how very Ray. I hope you have many more Gorgeous Carat stories to tell - especially now that there's Gorgeous Carat - La Esperanza for inspiration.
| Chairleg01 3/7/09 . chapter 1
What a great story. You always capture their characters so well. Very enjoyable