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Reviews for: Checks and Balances
astraplain
2009-03-07 . chapter 1
What a wonderful surprise to find your new story today. Your Ray and Florian are a delight, as is this story. I especially like the last last line - how very Ray. I hope you have many more Gorgeous Carat stories to tell - especially now that there's Gorgeous Carat - La Esperanza for inspiration.
Chairleg01
2009-03-07 . chapter 1
What a great story. You always capture their characters so well. Very enjoyable
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