oh. so beautiful it makes me want to cry!

did you make those words up or are they in a language? i like it. if i had my cookie jar i'd give you a cookie. coolness.

Wow... It's just like the people in World War II. Awesome job!
-D101

wow, just wow. This was such a fascinating and well written story.

Realy good story, so sad yet at the end so nice.
Please continue