Megumi's past with the Kuro Taifuu sounds interesting.
I'm really happy because i got everything that i wanted for this chapter. Thank you for such a good chapter. I can't wait for more, you know how to keep me interested.
I'm the one that asked for more of Meru and i'm not disappointed, at all. I understand that she doesn't speak english, but her japanese dialogs were good. She's one of my favorite characters. Also, there's something curious about the first time when she had her visions, right? Because Megumi and Satoshi acted in a way that makes me think that there's something more.
I imagine that the training will be different for each member, because each one of them has different skills. I'm excited to see that.
Anyway. I must admit that the most interesting part of the whole chapter is the object that the Kuro Taifuu want.
Good work with the whole chapter and all the characters. Like i said before, i can't wait for more.

Short, but good. I hope some action in the next chapter, any kind of action. That makes me sound like a pervert, hahaha.
Anyway. Keep up the good work, and give more dialogs to Meru! I don't know why but she's the most interesting character. Maybe because of the visions. Also, i wanna know more about the villains, i would like more of them. And, last but not least, a bit of slash, baby.

See ya!

I was starting to worry that you wouldn't update. I'm still enjoying this just as much as I did when it started, and look forward to your next update.

Thanks for showing us that we were wrong! Gosh, i missed this fic. Good chapter, good chapter, but i need my slash. hahaha. Nah, i'm just kidding. (Am i? O.o)
I hate the ending "they were unaware of a spy walking away from a hidden position across the street." Is too much suspense. Are you trying to kill me?
It doesn't matter if you take a long time to update, but you have to tell us, because we might think that you give up. ;)

See ya ♥

Is clearly evident that you discontinued this fanfiction, but i must admit that it was a good one. I was waiting for an original fanfiction with the Skinner/Jekyll pairing. Sadly, you gave up.
I enjoyed the fight. Mina is really in character.

Au revoir.

I would say that I can't believe you went through every single story posted in the LXG fandom to ascertain that you were being original...but I've done the same thing, so I guess I can't complain too much.

I enjoyed the battle scene a lot. The aftermath was sort of funny in a macabre way. "My arm hurts!" "I'm tired! "Well I got my ** arm cut off!"

I never imagined reattaching a limb. I'd imagined weeks of agonizing bone regrowth, but your way is faster.

I eagerly await your next update.

Mina and Henry siblings? Hontoni? (Really?) Hahaha. That part was very funny. They are very alike. So, it's a common mistake. As always, your chapters seems to have mystery and possible romance. Or maybe it's just me. Hahaha.
Anyway. Continue! Drakena-san! =3

See ya ♥

You take so long with the update. I almost forget about this fic.
I can only say one word after this chapter: Ouch!
Poor Tom. The kunoichi (Female ninja) kick his manhood. xD
I want some S/J slash in the next chapter, please, please, please, please. :3

See ya, Luv.

Good chapter. But you take too long in update. I almost thought that you wouldn't finish this fic.
Good Hyde/Jekyll chat. I like the way you portrayed Hyde. He's a total bastard. xD
For a momment i also thought that the enemy was Akatsuki. Ha ha ha ha ha. You know. A group of ninjas. Ha ha ha ha. OMG i'm soo dumb sometimes. xD
Anyway. Good chapter. I like more descriptive fics but it was a great chapter. ^w^
I'm waiting for the action ;)

See ya, Luv.

There are a few things that i saw in the fic, just thing that called my attention.
First: Jekyll is always blushing everytime he see Skinner. Coincidence? [Isn't a bad thing, it's just that called my attention]
Second: A secret agent doesn't know about close range combat? That's slightly convincing. He's an expert with guns but he need to know, at least, a few thing about close range combat. Maybe Skinner knows about the street close range combat (Which is probably better) but Sawyer had to learn it during his training as secret agent, is obvious.
Just a few things, that's all.
I like Mina's inner thoughts about Dorian. You make it in a good momment and in a great way. 100% Mina. You captured her personality in an amazing way. The same thing with Nemo. You made a very credible Captain Nemo. But, always a but, Skinner's personality...i don't feel it. It's probably me but the Skinner of this fic is very, very far away of the fantastic rogue in the movie. I don't feel the Rodney Skinner in him. He need to be more like himself. He's not only a man who drink scotch all the time. You can't make Skinner's personality only with that.
The Japanese culture is incredibly portrayed. Great job with that.
One last thing. I'm glad that you chose writing something that you like. I'm not a fan of the slash [S/J my big exception] but if you enjoy writing it you shouldn't think about the people who don't like it.

Au revoir.

I like this chapter. A lot. It doesn't have action, i'm waiting the action (i mean explosions and fights, not sex, Though, i'll like some of it xD) but it's great. It's like the calm before the storm. I love, absolutely love, the part when Hyde said: "A man like you could never get a woman! You are a damn coward!". And then Skinner appears. That has a double meaning? Jekyll could never get a woman, like Hyde said, but a man is totally different. *Wink* *wink* I love that part. When you said: "I should mention, there is a little bit of slash in this story, there might be more as the story goes on so those who are not comfortable with slash should be aware." That makes me soo happy. Really, really, happy. Now i want the next chapter with more entusiasm. Great job with the japanese culture. Please don't leave this fic, ok's? Finish it. Skinner/Jekyll Slash in Japan. You made my day, Drakena. ^.^

See ya.

Hm.. I like the bit of history that you put in. It gives the story a nice flavor.

Okay, you had me right up until the point Sawyer giggled. I liked it right up to that point... I do like the concept- there aren't a lot of stories with the League going that far east, so it's a nice change. And the bit with Meru having visions, that was interesting.

Just... please no more giggly Tom...

I’m intrigued. The entire premise is unusual and original. I eagerly await reading more.

Your Satoshi/Meru plot seems to be the most natural, and well written, possibly because (I think?) it is original fiction. Some of your characterization for the LXG seem to be based off of stereotypes…such as Skinner is constantly drinking and lurking around naked, Mina constantly being cool and somewhat distant, and Nemo seeming to know everything about everything. Of course, each of these are okay, and even useful to use, but in moderation.

For example, when I first read the line “asked Rodney Skinner after taking a gulp of scotch.” I somehow mistranslated it as “asked Tom Sawyer,” before going back and reading it over. But, when I thought about it, why isn’t Tom drinking? He seems like the type who might be drinking around the dinner table, too…in fact, I believe that Nemo might be the only one of the group who would abstain completely from alcohol. And, is Skinner drinking all the time, or thinking about drinking all the time? I don’t think so, myself.

Henry Jekyll’s line: "I need some time out of my cabin, I cannot get any rest” was a bit confusing. Who was he talking to? Either Hyde or himself, and I doubt it was the former, and the latter doesn’t seem to fit the quiet man.

The only thing that I’m not particularly fond of is the next chapter preview. Personally, I didn’t even like it in the show Naruto.

And, in regards to your note “but I will not make it too bold for those who might not be comfortable with slash”: don’t worry about it, and write what you want to. You should never tone down your writing just because of what people might say. Of course, if you yourself don’t want to write slash, then that’s a different thing altogether, but really; don’t worry too much about the “moral” opinions of the anonymous voices on the Internet.

I agree wholeheartedly with Bitter Sweet Vie; you do a masterful job of giving protagonistic spotlight to all of our heroes. Well done!

I really enjoy that Naruto-esque qualities you've given to Tom and the little previews are just hilarious. That bit where Nemo was explaining part of Japan's history to Tom was very enjoyable. It brought me straight back to the glory days of Rurouni Kenshin.

I'm very much looking forward to your next update. The suspense is building for me and I'm enjoying this fun bit of fanfiction. :]

P.S. Your Skinner et Jekyll is scrumptious.