wow I think you should update soon. this is such a great story! the only thing that could make it better is to make the chapters a bit longer, but plz update soon!

thanks for reading this-

Sadistic-**

MUST HAVE MORE

Nice job, great oneshot.

Very interesting story. Like to see more of it.

Great beginning I am really hooked. Please update and soon.

woot go seras! awesomely written, can't wait for more :)

I'm happy to see a different type of story and am excited to see the next chapter. But, I would be wary of sentence structure and using either the past or present tense. I am so pleased this isn't another "poor Seras" story and I am, once again, looking forward to an update.