Aw, how adorable =D

This was short like my drabble but great!

I found it cute and entertaining.

The way you ended this was quite amusing XD

Wah this is so cute ^^
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OMFG! YESH! FINALLY! You made my day so much more brighter, did you know that? I have been waiting SO long for a vanillexlightning fic and this just made my heart melt at the cute fluff!

In short, it was tremendously adorable! I liked it...lots! LOTS! :D LightningxVanille scenes are to die for! I'd love the game so much if they actually put some...even little tiny hints help!

Anywho, this was a fun read! Especially the ending, AWW! LIGHTNING BLUSHED! AHAHHA! XD Yay! And that kiss...YES!! it was so cute.

"Because Vanille expected it, she easily danced around the incoming fireball." That simple ending line was priceless and perfectly timed. Way to go!

~animeaics

PS: Hope your friend challenges you again for ANOTHER lightningxvanille fic! I'd love to read another!

Like everyone else said so far, this is a very cute heartwarming story. It's neat and fun to read in all of its simplicity and Lightning and Vanille seemed so right acting the way that they did in this fic. I really believe that Lightning would be the one to follow a strict set of rules, all straight-laced and whatnot--this is judging by the creator's descriptions of course.
Vanille's perkiness didn't seem out of tune at all either. Overall it was well written and well worth the read.

There was a small typo here:

"While she did admire Lightning’s single-minded focus, Vanille thought it was pity that she usually seemed so tense."

You mean to add "a" so that it would read as:

"While she did admire Lightning’s single-minded focus, Vanille thought it was a pity that she usually seemed so tense."

But even that can be overlooked since it was so small and it didn't detract from the cuteness of the story. That's all. xD

- TBP

LOL!! that was really funny especially at the end.
- Because Vanille expected it, she easily danced around the incoming fireball!

aw big sister little sister teasing lol

Short but funny, simple but memorable... I like it! Very cute, and some how it seems right with Vanille and Lightening.

This is such a cute story!! I loved it!

They are great friends aren't they?! Hahahaha!

Lightning's scared of a bug? It's okay, your secret is safe with me.