Aside from some silly spelling errors, this is really a great story. So write more. If you would like, I will help you edit spelling errors. Send me a message. This story is great.

Keep up the good work!

Yay! you wrote a new chapter, I can't wait until the next one. Keep up the good work!

-hinata

Hoho! Poor Seras is being stalked by ze big bed volf, eh? Actually...poor Hans. He's going through werewolf puberty, not fun. This looks like it'll be very interesting, and the plot gets thicker. I hope to see more soon.

Especially Entertained - Azure Zangetsu

its about time girl! i shouldnt talk though, i havnt made any pics or comics lately... ive hit a wall and am just now getting over it(found out i had to finish this game and find out the ending of the two main couple) now im drawing again whoo! anyway, take your time just let the readers now there is some progress being done...also, look over the story after you do the spell check becuase there are some words in here that dont make sense.

see ya on DA!

Great! :) I can´t wait for the next chapter, I liked it so far..

very coolies on the chapter with the cute scene between Seres and Hans and what happened

ps. i liked the father/motherhood stories they were adorable

Very Nice I like how this tale is beginning to develop and the Hans Seras scene was cute it was like he was subconsciously flirting with her.

Very Well done!

please update soon! i really want to know what happens next!

You don't know how happy you've made me. *creepy smile*.
Wahoo! More drama! Seras is so damn lucky! She doesn't even know how lucky she is! Ergh, where are all the silver-haired, muscular, superstrong, werewolf, mute, handsome, nazi soldiers when I need them?!?! I swear, some girls get all the luck. All I get is some obnoxious a**holes in my grade that don't know the meaning of modesty. Grah!

this is really good so far! I cant wait for more!

keep writing plz!

Please write more, this is a wonderful story. Sorry if I had already sent you a message but I'm very forgetful.

-Hinata

dude u gotta update this is really good.

more please this is really good and i cant weight to find out what will happen next