 Pookyilicous 2009-10-19 . chapter 17aww hugs for Cloud
Great chapter
Pooky x |
 ColinatorGX 2009-10-16 . chapter 17A great chappie |
 silverdigger 2009-10-16 . chapter 17Hm. Not knowing what his other nightmares have included, this one actually would indicate that Cloud needs to let go and trust the future, take the plunge with Tifa. Is that what you intended? Good chapter, and I enjoyed the strong emotions/reactions you wrote as well as the more subtle indications of their strengthening relationship. |
 kerapal bubbles 2009-10-15 . chapter 17aw! that totally reminded me of Star Wars episode I... |
 BrownSugarCandy 2009-10-15 . chapter 17Aww, that was simply sweet.
Cloud having nightmares and Tifa is his backbone.
Adorable. |
 QueenAlla 2009-10-15 . chapter 17I didn't find any errors here, I don't think >.> Well done.
I enjoyed this chapter-as usual ;3 It was really sweet-Cloud dreaming of Tifa, too ^_^ |
 Misakiii-Chocolate-Chan 2009-10-15 . chapter 17Yeah I Recognized the dream, I'm also waiting at part VI of Dead Fantasy ><
BTW great fanfic. You have talent. |
 mom calling 2009-10-14 . chapter 17Sometimes, the thing we most fear catches our intense emotion and springs out at us from behind benign things during our every day life. So Cloud fears his dream of Tifa disappearing over the cliffs, saying the powerful buzz words 'trust me', and he looses her. It's so absolutely mind blowing to him, that he starts to think it might be real...it's happened to me. It is terrifying. The thing you fear most can come true because secretly you must want it to, otherwise why would you dream it? A horrible circle of emotion. In Cloud's world, you have to deal with this s-t alone, but in ours, there is help available, if a person believes in it...Cloud believes in Tifa, and we trust she will work her magic...they both deserve a break, for goodness sake. thx, gingerbreadbear... mc |
 ObsessiveCompulsiveValkyrie 2009-10-14 . chapter 17I totally knew that was DF! I loved that CloTi sequence, even if it wasn't much... Then Cloud had to go and save Yuna while Tifa's getting beaten to a pulp by inherently disposable ninjas...
*Ahem* That was a really sweet piece... I adore brief oneshots like this (Likely because I lack the ability to make them myself), and I couldn't help but smile at this. It's just so... Cloud... to keep things to himself. Especially something so tormenting. Naturally he'd want to keep it to himself. And Tifa bevaved very in-character, too. Her maternal, wake-up-at-any-hour alarms are going off and she just wants Cloud to trust her. Very nice job!
I can't wait to see what you come up with! I can come with another three items if you like...
'Til next time!
-Valk |
 LatteJazz 2009-10-14 . chapter 17I liked it! although it did remind me too much of the second Matrix movie. Dunno if that was intentional or not? =]
What's Dead Fantasy? I'll hafta look it up... |
 TiffanyLockheart 2009-10-14 . chapter 16Trust is the most important thing in a relationship! Well... love is really but trust is really close! ^^
IH!! i got a cyber cookie?! NOM NOM NOM xD |
 ObsessiveCompulsiveValkyrie 2009-10-13 . chapter 16Ah, yeah. Short. It... kind of made sense. If someday you wrote a story surrounding it, that would be cool.
I can't wait to see what you come up with for my prompt! If you want revenge, I do have CloTi Fluff and Words Aren't the Only Way that accept prompts...
-Valk |
 BrownSugarCandy 2009-10-13 . chapter 16Simple but elegant.
Yes it was short, but it held alot of meaning,
eventhough i had to read it a couple of times just to fully understand it. |
 Pookyilicous 2009-10-13 . chapter 16I really liked this drabble :)
Pooky x
Thanks for the mention and the cookie XD |
 QueenAlla 2009-10-12 . chapter 16Promises exposed the doubt behind their words and actions.
Wow, so true ^_^ Never heard that one before.
I enjoyed this-short, simple and meaningful :3 Great chapter.
Update fast x3 |