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Pookyilicous
2009-10-19 . chapter 17
aww hugs for Cloud


Great chapter

Pooky x
ColinatorGX
2009-10-16 . chapter 17
A great chappie
silverdigger
2009-10-16 . chapter 17
Hm. Not knowing what his other nightmares have included, this one actually would indicate that Cloud needs to let go and trust the future, take the plunge with Tifa. Is that what you intended? Good chapter, and I enjoyed the strong emotions/reactions you wrote as well as the more subtle indications of their strengthening relationship.
kerapal bubbles
2009-10-15 . chapter 17
aw! that totally reminded me of Star Wars episode I...
BrownSugarCandy
2009-10-15 . chapter 17
Aww, that was simply sweet.
Cloud having nightmares and Tifa is his backbone.
Adorable.
QueenAlla
2009-10-15 . chapter 17
I didn't find any errors here, I don't think >.> Well done.
I enjoyed this chapter-as usual ;3 It was really sweet-Cloud dreaming of Tifa, too ^_^
Misakiii-Chocolate-Chan
2009-10-15 . chapter 17
Yeah I Recognized the dream, I'm also waiting at part VI of Dead Fantasy ><

BTW great fanfic. You have talent.
mom calling
2009-10-14 . chapter 17
Sometimes, the thing we most fear catches our intense emotion and springs out at us from behind benign things during our every day life. So Cloud fears his dream of Tifa disappearing over the cliffs, saying the powerful buzz words 'trust me', and he looses her. It's so absolutely mind blowing to him, that he starts to think it might be real...it's happened to me. It is terrifying. The thing you fear most can come true because secretly you must want it to, otherwise why would you dream it? A horrible circle of emotion. In Cloud's world, you have to deal with this s-t alone, but in ours, there is help available, if a person believes in it...Cloud believes in Tifa, and we trust she will work her magic...they both deserve a break, for goodness sake. thx, gingerbreadbear... mc
ObsessiveCompulsiveValkyrie
2009-10-14 . chapter 17
I totally knew that was DF! I loved that CloTi sequence, even if it wasn't much... Then Cloud had to go and save Yuna while Tifa's getting beaten to a pulp by inherently disposable ninjas...

*Ahem* That was a really sweet piece... I adore brief oneshots like this (Likely because I lack the ability to make them myself), and I couldn't help but smile at this. It's just so... Cloud... to keep things to himself. Especially something so tormenting. Naturally he'd want to keep it to himself. And Tifa bevaved very in-character, too. Her maternal, wake-up-at-any-hour alarms are going off and she just wants Cloud to trust her. Very nice job!

I can't wait to see what you come up with! I can come with another three items if you like...

'Til next time!

-Valk
LatteJazz
2009-10-14 . chapter 17
I liked it! although it did remind me too much of the second Matrix movie. Dunno if that was intentional or not? =]
What's Dead Fantasy? I'll hafta look it up...
TiffanyLockheart
2009-10-14 . chapter 16
Trust is the most important thing in a relationship! Well... love is really but trust is really close! ^^

IH!! i got a cyber cookie?! NOM NOM NOM xD
ObsessiveCompulsiveValkyrie
2009-10-13 . chapter 16
Ah, yeah. Short. It... kind of made sense. If someday you wrote a story surrounding it, that would be cool.

I can't wait to see what you come up with for my prompt! If you want revenge, I do have CloTi Fluff and Words Aren't the Only Way that accept prompts...

-Valk
BrownSugarCandy
2009-10-13 . chapter 16
Simple but elegant.
Yes it was short, but it held alot of meaning,
eventhough i had to read it a couple of times just to fully understand it.
Pookyilicous
2009-10-13 . chapter 16
I really liked this drabble :)



Pooky x

Thanks for the mention and the cookie XD
QueenAlla
2009-10-12 . chapter 16
Promises exposed the doubt behind their words and actions.
Wow, so true ^_^ Never heard that one before.
I enjoyed this-short, simple and meaningful :3 Great chapter.
Update fast x3
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