you told us it what kind of story it was right from the title, but it still takes a while to come clear. great story! (er, was that a spoiler?)

gratefully,

db

This was great.

I love your writing. You should do more! :)

Ooh...light suspense! Who _is_ the visitor? Hmm...could it be the return of the leader who was killed two episodes in? Who? please?

Please read and review my works! :)

A neat story. What a neat, neat story. So much being said without anyone really coming out and saying it. And the unmentioned "twist" of Donovan's visitor was fabulous. I absolutely loved it. A great story.

Hmm interestin'! you should do some more on this story!

This is really good! I liked how the "intruder" came back to check up and is giving his advice. I hope there will be a sequel!

Very Good! Who was the night-time visiter? The old commander ?John? Please continue writing.