Ugh, dude/dudette, I really don't know if you r a boy r a girl, but anyway... I was wondering, all the way til the end, what happened to Amy? I understand all the other stuff, but what was up with Amy's headache? Was she the most powerful or something? I mean really, if this is an Amy and Shadow thing, pregnant Amy should be in there for a bunch of times or something. I give this story an 8/10. I still loved it though. It kicks **! I was just wondering is all.

~Mia~

I won't apply for the Beta Reader-thingy. Not because I'm crap at beta-reading, but because I'm extremely un-reliable. Ah well... it sounded fun...

Ooh, what's going on? Tales of The Wind? Sonic and the Black Knight and The Secret Rings? Could be...

Evil Laugh! Muhahahahahahaha!

Ja Ne! -Force 'Hog

NO! NO EVIL LAUGH FOR YOU!

... good chapter though.

See Ya! Force 'Hog

Geeze I'm starting to get tired of Evil laugh situations...

PSYCHE! MUHAHAHAHAHAHA!


Ja Ne, Force 'Hog

Yet another Evil Laugh situation! Muhahahahaha! Sorry for being late!

-Force 'Hog

WHOA that was dizzying...time travel always makes my head spin. It's nothing but a big circle of confusion is what it is, but it also adds a special spice of interest to a story for sure.

Excellent job on all three chapters--sorry for the slow reviews; I haven't been able to get on my email because of school, but nonetheless! I will turn my email updates on my phone ON now. ^^; What a twist adding Maria in. It was really awesome to see her. :D

Not TOTALLY crazy about Sonic's Chaos Blast...I'm just one for having the chaos powers for Shad and Doom, but you ARE the author, so you do what you feel is fitting! And it does fit sorta in here because everyone has so many elements.

"He paused, seeing someone who looked much like him, apparently battling a green bat." ...? Eh? [scanning through memories of ShtH and SA2] What is that...? Is this someone him or his daddy? (XD) Do tell--I'm curious.

As always, I'm eager to see you-know-who. [smack] Great job! Update soon!
-Laz

Waah! No Sonic, don't leave damnit! Now Blaze is gonna be a single mom!

Wow, I haven't reviewed this story like, at all, between Camp and School.

But this has been an amazing read, despite the headaches involved in the time travelling. @.@

I can't WAIT for the next ark of the story! Especially if Sonic comes back!

And poor Issai, now an orphan and realizing that his whole life is a sham. Well, hopefully Stream's high spirits will keep him up! ... or they could just bicker like an old married couple.

Keep being awesome!

Wow~
Explosive~

Another excellent chapter! And now, back to Chaotic Memories!
It was cool how you managed to use most of the characters here, too. Rozik, I'm so proud of you!
Rozik:...*tired*

As for your Author's Note...I would love to beta for you! However, due to my Mom's rule, I cannot use MSN Messanger. Long story. But I could do everything other than that...^^;

Keep up the good work, as always!
~Ciel

...Intriguing. Their fates are left ambigious...and the others ('specially Blaze) worried...All shall be revealed in due time, like always...but there will always be mysteries within those revelations. Mysteries of the unknown...(Story pun.) Can't wait to see what happens, and keep up the good work!

~ADarknessInHeaven
aka: Sam

I would ask to be a beta reader, but I can't get MSN Messenger. My parents would kill me if I got software they didn't want and I already have AIM, so... if you could figure out a way to do this (cause most people don't have MSN Messenger, and most people in general don't have it either.

Anyhow, onto the chapter...

It was pretty good, especially as a wrap up chapter which left much open to what would happen next as a result of Metal's diabolical plan. I'm eager to see how the two planets would get along and how and if Sonic even will be able to escape the black hole and return to his friends once again.

But you tend to have the habit of one line paragraphs and a lack of description in them. For example, when unleashes the Chaos Blast, describe the dome of bright crimson that erupted in a semisphere from every part of his body, illuminating the room in a destructive hellish glow, you know? By not doing that, you're not only starving your story from even more value, but it's a disrespect for the English language. Paragraphs should be 3-6 sentences long that connect to each other and have breaks that have indents. A new one should be made whenever someone new speaks, and there should be limited description after it-just make a new line. This would really improve the story.

See? I know my stuff. But I can't get MSN Messenger, so...sorry.

O_o
A hell of alot of time travel.
But awesome~ X3
More please~

heheheheh, LOVE the references.


(and I doubt many other people actually GOT those references.)
Perfectly timed considering time travel is involved. (no pun intended)

...Manipulation of time and space can possibly be predicted in such hands. Perhaps this is the hand Fate's dealt them...or Metal. Either way, you've done a great job...keep it up!

~ADarknessInHeaven
aka: Sam

I think Rozik's comment sums up my confusion with time travelling: “You just brought me here...” Rozik muttered, “Where the hell did you go?”
Still, what a twist! Maria lives! And there's a plan to defeat Metal! GASP!
Everyone better be ready~!