 Ceres The Unknown Angel 2009-12-10 . chapter 1OH YES! Awsome! Boy do i love monkey-on-lion fanfictions!
Great job! ^__^ |
 Sora Lucis Caelum 2009-11-20 . chapter 1Aw~~ please write more! n.n
I really love the Squall's attitude and I wonder why Zidane flinched away :/
Anyway! I hope you can write another chappy n.n |
 BurgerKween 2009-11-08 . chapter 1 Holy crap. Do you know how long I've been waiting for someone to write a frickin' Zidane/Squall fic?! And on top of that you are a fantastic writer! You even keep them in character! Keep going please! :D |
 Kiari the Hell Cat 2009-10-16 . chapter 1Wow, I love the way you wrote this story. I don't usually find well writen things like this often, so this is a treat for me. I really hope to see more of this story. *hint*update*hint* |
 ToraTracks 2009-09-15 . chapter 1ah! thats was really good! :D fave pairing...hope its a pairing anyway! xD |
 buchik 2009-08-29 . chapter 1I love this. I knew about this game last night. Dissidia is epic! Squall and Zidane? Hell yes!
You have to continue this story! :D I really enjoyed reading it :) |
 imanut 2009-07-04 . chapter 1 I am absolutely loving this. Each time I read it, I'm filled with incredible joy!
I love Squall's unabashed apathy and how it kinda slips due to guilt when Zidane's tail is being bandaged. I'm excited to see that you've included the Disciplinary Committee, though I am a little dissappointed with how you characterized Seifer. Of course, I need to keep in mind that this is an AU and that something bad may have happened between Seifer and Squall for him to be frightened of the latter. But the way you've written Squall, Zidane, and Bartz (haha and Cloud!) definately make up for that minor flaw.
You have definately written something beautiful and humorous here and I look forward to your up-comming chapters!!
Love,
imanut~ |
 Ink-Me-Up 2009-06-23 . chapter 1Oh gosh, words cannot describe how much I love this. The idea of Squall and Zidane together is just all kinds of cute and everyone was written delightfully in character. It's always refreshing to find high school AU's that aren't swimming in angst, too.
Continue, pretty please? :D |
 Soari 2009-05-03 . chapter 1GOD THIS WAS AWESOME! It dosent mater if is a crack pairing they are so HOt together I almost have a nosebleed just to think about this two together.
But seriously I need tell you tha its a great fic, I like how do you put the characters, and the way that Squall is, its somethig really good too. I hope you update soon.
See you then and have for sure that Im be here give you reviews really often n_n |
 sallygrimreaper 2009-03-22 . chapter 1Ah, this is really different. And HOT!
Just thinking about them... ah! -nosebleed- xD
Well, I really like your first chapter. It's really good, and I like how Squall interacts with everyone.
And, ohmygosh, Seifer and his Disciplinary Committee! Just thinking about his FF-self doing that makes me giggle. xD
I wonder why he was really going to beat up Zidane...
>_>
He's probably just really jealous of his tail.
>_>
lol. Well, I can't wait for your next update. ^_^ |
 PoaTB 2009-03-13 . chapter 1Well, I am genuinely impressed with the setting and set up. My only disappointment was the disciplinary comity. There could have been more solid ground with this group. I remember in the game they were tougher and couldn't give a damn about Squalls threats. Especially Seifer. Seifer was all about pushing buttons and walk away with a sadistic triumph smirk about his face.
However I just realized this is an AU. Duh Poa! Of course they are not going to be the same. But I just thought I'd put somewhat of an input. Make them tougher. Please? C:
But the overall is good. Unlike other stories I have read, I approve of this. It didn't start out as a cliche story where you know what is going to happen next. So I look froward to your next installment. Yay! :D |
 Soba-san 2009-03-08 . chapter 1 ... DAMN YOU.
I DON'T NEED ANY OTHER CRACK OTPS FOR FINAL FANTASY.
...yet I can't really hate you, because your writing is amazing and this was hilarious and so totally perfect and in character and... and... I'm really, really hoping there's more to come.
New crack OTP, ahoy! -resigned to her 'fate'-
~Soba-san |
 cloudstrifejen 2009-03-08 . chapter 1The extremely cold ice prince and the monkey-tailed Zidane together is kinda funny and cute! Lol! I'm so right about Cloud having a crush on Sephiroth! ( |
 Myshu 2009-03-08 . chapter 1THIS TASTES LIKE SWEET & SOUR FLUFF. It is, indisputably, the best kind.
I've told Kas already, but there's so many lol moments. I adore this Squall, all gruff and blunt and strangely heroic. And creepy, introverted, obsessed Cloud. And twiggy BUTZ (I don't care how it's localized, he will ALWAYS be the butz.) And clingy, scrawny little "holy crap where does he put all that ramen" Zidane. Also "Get your broody ass back here, Leonhart!" HAH.
Leaving my OFFICIAL stamp of fanfic approval here. |
 Ryuuax Shadow 2009-03-08 . chapter 1oh my gosh! you need to continue this I love it! love how you potrayed everyone! |