|Reviews for The Bridge Of Death|
| Aria Breuer 5/6/11 . chapter 1
This was a good one-shot.
I did find some grammatical mistakes. In the sentence, "Thinking it was all a joke you indulged him...", "you" should be replace with "he". Another grammatical mistake I caught was "embarasses", which needs to be replaced with "embarassed".
Otherwise, good work.
| ultima-owner 8/15/10 . chapter 1
| Loquacious Lass 11/6/09 . chapter 1
I quite enjoyed it, but please give me the pleasure of saying this.
Ahem. YOUR MOTHER WAS A HAMSTER, AND YOUR FATHER SMELT OF...EL-DERBERRIES!
haha no it rocked
| GluttonousAnorexiaNervosa 8/4/09 . chapter 1
Okay, so the Occasional David Bowie Stand-in was my favorite part. Mmhmm.
| Ying-Fa-dono 3/8/09 . chapter 1
Nice. Doesn't Sarah realize she's all over Youtube already? I almost wanted Jareth to ask a retorical question and guy from scene 24 to fall off the bridge because he didn't know the answer. It's still okay that he didn't. Okay, now get some sleep!